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gulshan-e dil mein Khiley hein teri yaadon ke gulab

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Old 05-05-2008, 08:17 AM
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wahhhhhh.. janab bohat hi umda nazm kahi aapne.. rawani, alfaz.. takhayyul.. sabhi kuch bharpoor.. wahhh..

bohat khush rahiye
jab kisi sukhanwar ko tehreer pasand aaey aur aisi bherpoor daad miley tow apney aap ko waqaee shaaer samajhney ko dil kerney lagta hay.

Bohat shukria itni achi daad ka aey maseehaa-e HG

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bohat undah............... ............
Bey had shukria Yasmin

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Kiaa baat hay bahut bahut khoobsoorat likha hay aap ne , kiaa baat hay khush rahiye

Nazm ki pasndeedgi aur daad ka shukria natwaN saheb.

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sochta hun ke mohabbat se kanara karlun
dilko beganaye targeeb o tamanna kar lun
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai junoone ruswa
chund bekar se behuda khayalon ka hujoom
ek azad ko paband banane ki sayee
ek begane ko apnane ki sayiye mauhoom
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai suroor o masti
uski tanveer se raushan hai fazaye hasti
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai bashar ki fitrat
uska mitjana mitadena bahot mushkil hai
sochta hun ke mohabbat se hai tabinda hayat
ab ye shamma bujhadena bahot mushkil hai
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Shama-e shauq farozaaN hay sar-e bazm-e junooN
Ho chukey Khak kabhi ke par-e perwana-e hosh
Germi-e aatish-e furqat sey sulagti hay hayat
hasrat-e deed mein phaili hay nazar ki aaghosh


baei wahhh.... kya nazm keh di hy jnab... par-e-parwana-e-hosh ki to kaya hi baat hy, zabardast... kya umda tarakeeb istamal ki haiN ... bohat lutf diya in misroN ne... meri janib se bhi in nazm pr daad ka nazrana qubool kijiay, takheer ki bohat bohat mazrat k sath...

likhty raheay aur ham se share krty raheay... Allah Taala aap ko aur nawazy... khush raheN aabad raheN....
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sochta hun ke mohabbat se kanara karlun
dilko beganaye targeeb o tamanna kar lun
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai junoone ruswa
chund bekar se behuda khayalon ka hujoom
ek azad ko paband banane ki sayee
ek begane ko apnane ki sayiye mauhoom
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai suroor o masti
uski tanveer se raushan hai fazaye hasti
sochta hun ke mohabbat hai bashar ki fitrat
uska mitjana mitadena bahot mushkil hai
sochta hun ke mohabbat se hai tabinda hayat
ab ye shamma bujhadena bahot mushkil hai
Bey had shukria itney achey kalam ko share kerney ka.

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Shama-e shauq farozaaN hay sar-e bazm-e junooN
Ho chukey Khak kabhi ke par-e perwana-e hosh
Germi-e aatish-e furqat sey sulagti hay hayat
hasrat-e deed mein phaili hay nazar ki aaghosh


baei wahhh.... kya nazm keh di hy jnab... par-e-parwana-e-hosh ki to kaya hi baat hy, zabardast... kya umda tarakeeb istamal ki haiN ... bohat lutf diya in misroN ne... meri janib se bhi in nazm pr daad ka nazrana qubool kijiay, takheer ki bohat bohat mazrat k sath...

likhty raheay aur ham se share krty raheay... Allah Taala aap ko aur nawazy... khush raheN aabad raheN....

Faizan Saheb:

Nazm ki pasndeedgi aur daad ka shukria.


Khaksar

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Kash aa jaaey kabhi bam-e tasawur pi hi tu
apni aankhon meiN chalaktey huey paimaaney liye

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Old 05-14-2008, 09:47 PM
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