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Gilla... aik nazm meri

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Old 01-09-2005, 05:50 PM
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salam


umeed hay ap loog achay hongay ...apni aik nazm share kerraha hoon ...mairay apnay ahsasat ...Immaan bohoot bari cheez hay or is ka yaqeen main badal jana bohoot bari naimat..Allah ap k imman pukhta karay mairay liyay bhi dua kijiyga ..kionk shaitan to sab k khilaf hay ..her tarah k khiyal atay hi hain zahn main..maazrat chahta hoon agar ksii ko is nazm par aitraz hoo

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ay Khuda
tu hi bata
Zehn ka ye der mera
kio.N hay nahi ab tak khula
kio.N hay ab tak sooz e dil
kio.N hay ya bay-cheni bata
kiya meray is derd ki koi dawa hay ya nahi.N
mujh ko himat day
ya phir
is derd ko Had say barha
Tu magar itna bara..itna buland itna azeem
Tujh ko kiya ay chara gar
ik baysakoo.N ki piyaas say
Tu nay to paighamber bhaijay
kitabai.N bhaij dee.N
loog ab bhi bay sakoo.N hain to
Jahanam hay khula
hay ye sach
Tu hay bara hi bayNiaz
loog jo hai.N bay yaqeen
un pay bhi taira karm hay
or jin ko hay yaqee.N
wo bhi baray bay dard hai.N
bay niyazi main wo Tujh say kaam nahi.N
baysakoo.N logoo.N say un ko bhi
bohoot hi khar hay

oor ham jo baysakoo.N hai.N
beech main atkay howay
daikhtay hain baybassi say
donoon kay raaz o niyaaz
hum bhi laiken
der taira you.N choornay walay nahi
mer rahay hain piyaas say laiken
hamain umeed hay
baithay hain der per Tairay taktay howay
janay kab ya der khulay
zulmat e shak main bhataktiii rooh ko
rooshni ki ik kiran ki bheek
janaay kab milay



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ALLAH sey dua hey bhaii aap koo zindagii kii sarrii rahteyn naseeb hoon AAMEEN@};-
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bohot hi shikwa hi ji twanun
I hope Allah will listen to you
Nice Way of doing Shikwa
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salam!
ALLAH listens to everyone all the time , only His way to reply cannot be understood by ordinary persons like us.we are breathing right now this is not less then a miracle,nice expression.keep writing.
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der taira you.N choornay walay nahi
mer rahay hain piyaas say laiken
hamain umeed hay
baithay hain der per Tairay taktay howay
janay kab ya der khulay
zulmat e shak main bhataktiii rooh ko
rooshni ki ik kiran ki bheek
janaay kab milay



Yeh lines bohot khubsoorat kahi

May Allah Shower Blessings On U.
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Khuda sab ki baat sunta hai tahir bas hum hi nahi samajh patai nazam aap nai bauhat khubsurat likhi hai aur dua hai kai aap ko zindagi ki har khushi milai ameen sum ameen /dua

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Bohat achi nazam likhi aap nay...

wat everz happenin... iz happening 4 gud....
have faith in HIM...
God bless u
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ALLAH sey dua hey bhaii aap koo zindagii kii sarrii rahteyn naseeb hoon AAMEEN@};-

salam


bohoot shukriya app ka ..duaoon main yaad rakhiyayga (f)


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bohot hi shikwa hi ji twanun
I hope Allah will listen to you
Nice Way of doing Shikwa

salam

thanx a lott ...n thx for the prayers too (f)

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salam

thanx a lott ...n thx for the prayers too (f)

tahir
wa alaikum as slaam

its ok u keep on sharing
i like poems
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