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Old 08-22-2008, 05:34 AM
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first i thank asif for correction now my ghzal is ready for you..pls read and gave comments
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Wah janab wah....bohot hi umda....behad khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai....khayalat bohot hi buland haiN....aik shaire ka intekhab to mushkil hai......poori ki poori ghazal ke liye bohot si daad haazir-e-khidmat hai
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thank for like it.................
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first i thank asif for correction now my ghzal is ready for you..pls read and gave comments

bhuat hi umda ghazal dheron daad qabool kijiye. khush rahiye or share krtey rahiye
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very nice frist time i read your poetry thanks.
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thank a lot to like it..........
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bahut umda, bahut khoobsoorat, daad qubool kijiye ga.
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