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Ghazl::: Cheraagh jaan kay yuoN hi jalaa liaa gia thaa

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Default Re: Ghazl::: Cheraagh jaan kay yuoN hi jalaa liaa gia thaa

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Cheraagh jaan kay yuoN hi jalaa liaa gia thaa
HamaiN bhi taaq ki zeenat banaa liaa gia thaa.

Tumhaaray lams se mehzooz kis tarha hotay
Ke hum ko khwaab se baaher bulaa liaa gia thaa.

Isii ilay to abhii tak maiN naamukammil hooN
Adhoora chaak se mujh ko uthaa liaa gia thaa.

Thay sirf hum hi, jo rakhtay thay dil bhi, dunyaa bhi
YouN aag paani ko baahum milaa liaa gia thaa.

Utar to jaatay kisii saahil e muraad pe hum
HamaiN hawaa kay bhanwar maiN phansaa liaa gia thaa.

Abhii talak haiN Usii kay asar maiN hum Ashraf
Jo Naghma wasl ka khalwat maiN gaa liaa gia thaa.


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AOA VERY NICE DEAR .................... ..........
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Ab aap mairi is ghazal ko Urdu format ke saath bhi paRh saktay haiN.
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Originally Posted by Ashraf Naqvi

Cheraagh jaan kay yuoN hi jalaa liaa gia thaa
HamaiN bhi taaq ki zeenat banaa liaa gia thaa.

Tumhaaray lams se mehzooz kis tarha hotay
Ke hum ko khwaab se baaher bulaa liaa gia thaa.

Isii ilay to abhii tak maiN naamukammil hooN
Adhoora chaak se mujh ko uthaa liaa gia thaa.

Thay sirf hum hi, jo rakhtay thay dil bhi, dunyaa bhi
YouN aag paani ko baahum milaa liaa gia thaa.

Utar to jaatay kisii saahil e muraad pe hum
HamaiN hawaa kay bhanwar maiN phansaa liaa gia thaa.

Abhii talak haiN Usii kay asar maiN hum Ashraf
Jo Naghma wasl ka khalwat maiN gaa liaa gia thaa.


Ashraf Naqvi

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Tumhaaray lams se mehzooz kis tarha hotay
Ke hum ko khwaab se baaher bulaa liaa gia thaa.

Isii ilay to abhii tak maiN naamukammil hooN
Adhoora chaak se mujh ko uthaa liaa gia thaa.


Wah! Wah ! Ashraf Naqvi kiya hi khoob likhtay hoo MahsaAllah say ,, buhat sii daad qabool karaiN mayri janab say ,, buhat acha lagta hai app ko parh kar ,, buhat khush rahiey
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Thay sirf hum hi, jo rakhtay thay dil bhi, dunyaa bhi
YouN aag paani ko baahum milaa liaa gia thaa.

bauhat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nai bauhat umdah

khush rahiyai
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Janab-e-Ashraf Naqvii SaaHeb:
Aadaab,

Ghazal tu bilashubah bohat Khoob hai lekin najaane kyoN mujhe radeef meN voh kashish meHsoos naheeN hoovii jo aap kee taKhleeqaat meN hamesha meHsoos hotee rahii hai.
mazamneen bhi bohat Khoob baandhe heN aap ne aur ashaar meN tarz-e-bayaan bhi Khoob hai.
meree jaanib se daad qubool keejiye.

wassalam
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