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ghazal.........tanha ion ki gard say..

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Old 06-27-2008, 04:37 PM
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tanhaion ki gard say aaina att gaya
sanson kay aitbar main ik sal kat gaya

main jis kay aasray pay safar rang ho gaya
wu hamsafar to beech safar say palatt gaya


sang e garan ko mere hifazt pay naz tha
lawa ubal para to wu rastay say hatt gaya

mujh per muheet doobtay daria ka khof tha
pohncha main pull kay beech main to pul ulat gaya

abb kay huay wisaal kay sab marhlay tamam
ab kay teray firaq kay hison main batt gaya

mazhar main jab chala to koi sath sath tha
suraj k sar pay atay hi saya simatt gaya
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very nice..........Keep sharing~!~!~
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buhat umdha janab...........
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Old 06-28-2008, 12:19 PM
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very nice..........Keep sharing~!~!~
thx..............
boht shukria
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buhat umdha janab...........
ji tashakur .................... ...
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bahot khoob janaab,bahot achha laga paRh ke,
bahot khush rahiye,likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
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tanhaion ki gard say aaina att gaya
sanson kay aitbar main ik sal kat gaya

main jis kay aasray pay safar rang ho gaya
wu hamsafar to beech safar say palatt gaya


sang e garan ko mere hifazt pay naz tha
lawa ubal para to wu rastay say hatt gaya

mujh per muheet doobtay daria ka khof tha
pohncha main pull kay beech main to pul ulat gaya

abb kay huay wisaal kay sab marhlay tamam
ab kay teray firaq kay hison main batt gaya

mazhar main jab chala to koi sath sath tha
suraj k sar pay atay hi saya simatt gaya
Assalamualaik,

bohat umda mazhar sb.khusoosan maqta to hasil e ghazal hai........kya khoobsoorat baat ki hai.....zabardast... .......

Allah hafiz
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Old 06-28-2008, 10:05 PM
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Default Re: ghazal.........tanha ion ki gard say..

Kiya kehnay hain Mazhar saheb lajawab ghazal likhi hai aap ka lab-o-lehja behud pasand aaya. Buhat saari daad is kaawish par.
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Old 06-29-2008, 12:21 PM
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wuhi puranay chahnay walay
wuhi khaloos
wuhi muhbatain
boht shukria dosto,, ap ki hosla afzai ka tashakur
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