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RulesThis is a discussion on Ghazal: Phir vaqt ke daaman se lamhoon ko churaana hai. within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Azeezi saatiyoon aadaab, Apni ek aur koshish ke saat aap logoon kee bazm mein maujood hoon. Koshish ziyda puranee naheen ...
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04-21-2004, 11:41 AM
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Azeezi saatiyoon aadaab, Apni ek aur koshish ke saat aap logoon kee bazm mein maujood hoon. Koshish ziyda puranee naheen hai. Ek misrah kee tarHa pe ghazal keHne kee koshish kee hai. Misrah kuch yoon hai Masoom muhabbat ka masoom fasana hai Aap logoon kee aarah ka intizaar rahe gaa. Wassalam Zahida Raees :Raji -------- 1. Phir waqt ke daaman se lamhoon ko churaana hai yadoon ke ujaloon mein bachpan ko bulana hai 2. aahina-e-fitrat ka woh aks sunhaira saa palkoon mein piroona hai aank’hoon mein basana hai 3. rishtoon ka taqadus hai jazboon kee sadaqat hai yeh ghar hai muhabbat ka aur mera tik’hana hai 4. Larte hain jagharte hain phir bhi naa bicharte hain yeh aisa tahaluq hai yeh aisaa Khazaana! Hai 5. chiryoon ka chehkNa hai mamtaa ki hi chahoon mein UR jate hain sub panchee jis shaakh pe daana hai 6. dunya tu hai do pal kee, hai kis ko khabar kal kee kiyoon aaj ke lamhoon ko baykaar ghanwana hai 7. Lik’Hna tha hamain kiya kuch, hum bhool gahe sub kuch yeh apni haqeeqat bhi kiya khoob fasana hai 8. :Raji: ne yeh be-baakii seekhii hai "Yagaana" se! aNdaaz-e-bayaaN dekho, kis darja "tavaanaa" hai ----- Issi zameen per ek aur she'r yeh bhi hai. Choonke ghazal ke baha^o mein iss ko shamil kerNe se farq paRr raha thaa iss liye iss ko alag hee rakha. 1. kiya arsh ko paana hai kiya farsh ko panaa hai miL jahe dar-e-kaaba sar uss pe jhukana hai                  |
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04-21-2004, 12:45 PM
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bohot khubsorat kavish hai janab
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04-21-2004, 03:23 PM
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Khooobsurat ghazal /flowers
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04-21-2004, 03:40 PM
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Buhat khoob janab
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04-21-2004, 04:01 PM
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/aoa zabar10 /clap5 bahout khoob janab 1.gif ")1") aik sawal pochoon ? ager ap ko bura na lagay ?ap itni achi ghazal likh layti hain y don't u conrtibute in grand poetry contest round 3? hoping 2 c  ur contribution in round 3..bye tc ALLAH HAFIZ FE AMAN ALLAH Quote:
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04-21-2004, 08:11 PM
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bauhat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nai /flowers
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04-21-2004, 10:49 PM
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/aoa Raji ji! Bari umda Ghazal kahi aap ne,tamaam Ashaar khubsurat hain kisi aik k baaray main kia kaha jaaey,meri jaanib se mubaarak baad Qabool karain. keep writing keep sharing n keeep Soft voice/violin |
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04-21-2004, 10:56 PM
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bohat umda kawish hey janab. khubsurat kalam hey. aadab
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