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07-04-2004, 04:37 AM
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 Ley chaloun neel gagan key par' bas haan keh do iss bar Na janey konsa janm hey mera' bas haan keh do iss bar Wo barf key galoun jaisa kabootroun ka jora ik mehv-e-parwaz SargardaaN keoun hey chooHney ko akaash wo iss bar Gehrey paniyoun key ess pur shor sakoot mein pinhaaN Panup rahey hein hamari chahatoun key seep jo iss bar Chahat key dilfaraib zeenoun par rakh hee diey hein jo qadm Saath nikal para hamarey qafila-e-ashaaq' lu iss bar Surmaee' dhaani' oodey' badloun ke kahani Tanweer* Apni rangeen dastaan sey he ibarat hu iss bar Last edited by Tanweer; 07-04-2004 at 04:56 AM. Reason: i want to insert an image from my yahoo briefcase                  |
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07-04-2004, 11:06 PM
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very nice ji /rose khush rahiyai 1.gif ")1")
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07-05-2004, 07:29 AM
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Diya jee, pasandeedgi ka bhout shukriya, mein koshish kee thee key ghazal image par side mein likh kar post karoun, lekin kuch paley nahi para, mein apney yahoo briefcase sey ghazal.jpj yahn import karna chah raha tha lekin nakaam raha, so waisey hee simple paste kar dee. Baharhal apka dobara shukriya. Phir hazri doun ga. Apna khiyal rakhiey aur khush rahiey. BTW mein apni takhleeqat apni site par tarteeb dey raha houn, waqtan fowaqatan dekh liya kiejiey http://poetrypoem.com/tanweer Khair Andesh Tanweer |
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07-05-2004, 07:53 AM
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acha likha hey @};-
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07-05-2004, 08:49 AM
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Pasand karney ka shukriya. Khush rahiey Khair Andesh Tanweer |
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07-05-2004, 09:31 PM
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very nice
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07-06-2004, 08:32 AM
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achi ghazal kahi hai Tanweer jee... aur bhi likheye........nikha r aaye ga....@};- jeete raheye......
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07-06-2004, 11:31 AM
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nice :flower keep writting
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