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Ghazal: Hum pey kerni hay tujhay mashq-i-sitam

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Old 08-21-2008, 11:22 AM
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Aik aur adna si ghazal liye hazir hooN... ummeed hay apni ara'a se nawazaiNgay..



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tu bhi aaNkhoN maiN koyee khwaab chibho baiTha hai
teri aaNhoN se Tapakta hai tera khoon-e-jigar

Wah janab....bohot khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai.... aur khaas kar ke ooper wala shaire to bohot hi khoob raha....bohot si daad qubool kijye
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meiN ne tou sare kamal apne tujhe paish kye
tere aage koi jachta hi nahi mera hunar


Wah janab....bohut khoob.......bohut sari daad qabool kijye......
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wha wha wha kia batt hi buhat umdha ghzal.............
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Aik lamha sahib, bhuat hi umda kalam share krney per dheron daad qabool kijiye
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aachi gazal hai lamha payan
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very very nice................ .....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Saraabs View Post
tu bhi aaNkhoN maiN koyee khwaab chibho baiTha hai
teri aaNhoN se Tapakta hai tera khoon-e-jigar

Wah janab....bohot khubsoorat ghazal kahi hai.... aur khaas kar ke ooper wala shaire to bohot hi khoob raha....bohot si daad qubool kijye
Buhat buhat shukriya Saraabs... buhat khush rahiye
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