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RulesThis is a discussion on ghazal:He bar-e-aakhri jo tere aastaa.N pe hai.N within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; He bar-e-aakhri jo tere aastaa.N pe hai.N Phir jald dekhiyo ga ke wari butaa.N pe hai.N Shayed ye aashiyaa.N ko ...
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09-08-2008, 08:11 AM
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He bar-e-aakhri jo tere aastaa.N pe hai.N Phir jald dekhiyo ga ke wari butaa.N pe hai.N Shayed ye aashiyaa.N ko jala ker he lai.N ge dam Ye bijliyaa.N se koondti jo aasmaa.N pe hain Badle he rooz rooz nai shakl zindagi Kar-e-hayat naqsh joo.N aab-e-rawaa.N pe hai.N He khastagi yehi ke bacha koi sach nahi.N Qayam yaha.N wahi hai.N jo qayam gumaa.N pe hai.N Ik such ki umr aaj yahaa.N khatm ho chalee saye muheeb saya figan aashiyaa.N pe hai.N Jis raah pe chale the kahan rah wo rahe Kya janiye ke haath yaa.N kis ke anaa.N pe hai.N Khalid Jamil Rawat Last edited by khalidrawat; 09-08-2008 at 08:16 AM.                  |
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09-08-2008, 05:14 PM
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buhut umdahhhhh janab ap ka andaz e bayan buhut khoobsoorat hy alfazoon ki tarteeb buhut aala thnx 4 shearing
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09-09-2008, 08:57 PM
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Very nice ,bahut aala,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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09-16-2008, 05:51 AM
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09-17-2008, 06:10 AM
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He khastagi yehi ke bacha koi sach nahi.N Qayam yaha.N wahi hai.N jo qayam gumaa.N pe hai.N Ik such ki umr aaj yahaa.N khatm ho chalee saye muheeb saya figan aashiyaa.N pe hai.N Wah Khalid Bhai....kia kehne haiN janab....ek arse baad aap ka kalaam paRhnay ko mila aur hamesha ki tarah wahi lutf mila jo aap ke kalaam ko paRh kar mila karta hai...bohot si daad qubool kijye
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