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This is a discussion on Ghazal By Hasan Bhati within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Ghazal By Hasan Bhati Rahzan Ki Tang Damani Nazar Aane Ke Baad Apni Daulat Ka Hua Andaza Lut Jaane K ...
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05-10-2008, 08:06 PM
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Ghazal By Hasan Bhati Rahzan Ki Tang Damani Nazar Aane Ke Baad Apni Daulat Ka Hua Andaza Lut Jaane K Baad Mere Dukh Se Dab Gai Uski Bhi Koi Dukhti Rug Der Tak Rota Raha Wo Mujh Ko Sam Jhane K Baad Dil Kahin Hai Jan Kahin Hai Aur Kahin Hosho Khirad Baith Kar Khud Ko Sametonga Tere Jaane K Baad In Me Kho Kar Tujh Se Mai Ghafil Na Ho Jaon Kahin Tod Dena Sab Khilaone Mujhko Bahlane K Baad Sabt Karli Sab Ne Honto Par Qadam Bosi Ki Mohr Kaun Zikre Ishq Karta Tere Deewane K Baad Last edited by pnazO72; 05-11-2008 at 10:33 AM.         |
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05-10-2008, 08:13 PM
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As-Salam-Alaikum, Janab Hasan Bhati Sahib, Aap ka alfaaz ka chunao acha hai. Alfaaz ka hair phair bhi khoob hai bas aik choti si khami ki taraf ishara kar raha hoon jo kbhi meray shairon main bhi the jo mohtaram Amjad Islam Amjad sahib nain door ki, wo yeh hai kay aap kai kai shairon main pehlay misray ka matlab doosaray misray sa nahin milta jo shair kay husn kay khilaaf hai... Jaisay pehla, doosara aur teesra shair...
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05-10-2008, 10:09 PM
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v nice................ ........... |
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05-11-2008, 07:16 AM
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amjad islam amjad sahab se mera salaam kahiyega hasan bhati Last edited by pnazO72; 05-11-2008 at 10:34 AM. |
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05-11-2008, 07:33 AM
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bohat umda ghazal kahi hy aap ne, ye aap ki Poets Club meiN pehli ghazal hy so apko is mehfil meiN khush-amadeed kehty haiN, umeed hy aap ka waqt yahaN acha guzry ga. sath hi sath ye bhi pochna chahuN ga k kya ye aap ka zati kalaam hy??? 1.gif ")1") bura mat maniay ga, aisa is liay pochna paRa k aap ki profile meiN Gender: female show ho rahi hy, to qayas ye guzerta hy k aap ne apni pasand k kisi shair k kalaam se intkhab share kiya hy...keep posting... wish u best of luck...
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05-11-2008, 07:35 AM
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05-11-2008, 07:46 AM
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ghazal jis ki bhi hay jaisi bhi hay..... waheed akhtar waheed sahb ka tabsara zabar dast hay... bahar haal jis khami ki taraf muhtram waheed sahb nay ishara farmaya hay usay " Do-lakht" hona kehtay hain. jo ke mazkoora ghazal mein kahin nahin hay... pehla shear to hasil-e-ghazal hay... bura na maniay to janab Amjad Islam Amjad sahib say kahiay ke woh kuch din aor aap ki suhbat main rahain ta ke bohton ka bhla ho.... khair talab ikram azam
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05-11-2008, 07:49 AM
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MAIN AAM TOR SE NET SE DOOR HI RAHTA HOON.meri choti bahan parveen naaz k asraar par mujhe ghazal deni padi.inshaallah aaj hi apni ID bana loonga. ghazal pasand karne k liye ek baar phir mamnoon hoon. wassalam hasan bhati Last edited by pnazO72; 05-11-2008 at 10:30 AM. |
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05-11-2008, 08:00 AM
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waheed sahab bhi achha likhne ki koshish likhne ki koshish kar rahe hain main bhi ek taweel arse se taba aazmaai kar raha hoon aur lagta hai abhi bohot seekhna baqi hai aap ko ghazal ka pahla sher hasil e ghazal mahsoos hua..zarranawazi hai khair andesh hasan bhati Last edited by pnazO72; 05-11-2008 at 09:27 AM. |
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05-11-2008, 08:22 AM
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Azeem sahib, Tanqeed ka shukria, tanqeed aadmi ko betar ki taraf lay jaati hai magar agar tanqeed barye tanqeed na ho... Meray hissab say jo main nain post kia hai wo bilkul theek hai... Aur rahi Amjad Islam Amjad waali phabti ki baat, to main nain burra nahin manaya... Meray is reply ka Burra mat manye ga, izhaar aur khyalaat main tkrao hota rehta hai... Zara aap khud hi in do misron main zara sa taluq to qaim karnay ki koshish karin: Rahzan Ki Tang Damani Nazar Aane Ke Baad Apni Daulat Ka Hua Andaza Lut Jaane K Baad Mery hisaab say taaluq ki kami hai... Mera maqsad tanqeed karna nahin hai, main nain to Bhattii sb. kay shair kay husan ko dbaala karnay kay liye aik khoobsoorat mashwara diya hai kyoon keh mujhay un kay andar mustakbil ka aik acha shair nazar aya hai.
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