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Old 04-24-2008, 12:43 PM
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Sidra
tumhain pehli dafa parh raha hoon
boht acha andaz hay koshish aor mashq jari rakhna... apnay kalam ka khud say tanqeedi jaiza lia karo.... grammer ki ghaltian... radeef qafiay ka mas-ala...wazn ka muamla sab aahista aahista hal ho jain gay aor tum perfect shaira ban jao gi... abhi mashq kay saath saath achay sho-araa ka mutalia boht zaroori hay....

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Zabardast Sidra Pehle Say Bahtar Ho gai ho,
Magar MAYAR ki koi harf-e-akhir nahi hoti
koshish mazeed karni chahin
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nice getting improved and very nice art work.
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achi koshish rahi Sidra.. Aazam ki batoN par tawajjah dijiye..

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bohat undah............... .....daad ke saath bohat khush rahian
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bohat khub................ .........
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Assalam_o_Alaikum,

bohat shukriya aap sab ka, mari hosala afzai karnay ka. main InshaAllah koshish karti rahon gee bahtar say bahtar lakhnay ke...
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buhat umdha ...........abhi is main kafi kami hi

ishi tara laktay raho aur share kartay raho
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achi koshish rahi sidra isi tarha likhye aur share karye
apna khayal rakhyega
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