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| Sidra tumhain pehli dafa parh raha hoon boht acha andaz hay koshish aor mashq jari rakhna... apnay kalam ka khud say tanqeedi jaiza lia karo.... grammer ki ghaltian... radeef qafiay ka mas-ala...wazn ka muamla sab aahista aahista hal ho jain gay aor tum perfect shaira ban jao gi... abhi mashq kay saath saath achay sho-araa ka mutalia boht zaroori hay.... khair andesh azam
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| Assalam_o_Alaikum, bohat shukriya aap sab ka, mari hosala afzai karnay ka. main InshaAllah koshish karti rahon gee bahtar say bahtar lakhnay ke... thanks again |
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#10
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| achi koshish rahi sidra isi tarha likhye aur share karye apna khayal rakhyega |