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Masha Allah Aap To Bouhat Umda Poet Hai'n...Qaqeeqat Ki Akaasi Khoob Ki Hay...Khoobsurti Say Likhi Ghazal Bouhat Pasand Aai...
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Sohail bhai ap ki ye tehreer hamary moashry ki kai kharabioN pr khuli tanqeed hy...
ager ashaar meiN pesh ki jany wali fikr k hawaly se nazm ka jaiza liya ja'y to nazm bohat khoob hy, so bohat si daad qubool kreN...

lekin ager isy aik nazm k tor pr dekhuN to mehsoos hota hy k chand ashaar meiN qafia sahi andaaz meiN nibh nahi paya... (ya shayad ye meri samajh ki kota'hi ho....)


isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN,
Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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Sohail bhai ap ki ye tehreer hamary moashry ki kai kharabioN pr khuli tanqeed hy...
ager ashaar meiN pesh ki jany wali fikr k hawaly se nazm ka jaiza liya ja'y to nazm bohat khoob hy, so bohat si daad qubool kreN...

lekin ager isy aik nazm k tor pr dekhuN to mehsoos hota hy k chand ashaar meiN qafia sahi andaaz meiN nibh nahi paya... (ya shayad ye meri samajh ki kota'hi ho....)


isi trha acha acha likhty raheN, aur ham se share krty raheN,
Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN...
Faizan Bhai kia haal hay umeed hay keh tabiet bakhair ho gi

Aap nay nazm kay mazmoon ko pasand kia bohat shukria

albata kafiay kay silsilay maiN jo misray aap ko Theek nahiN lagay woh zarur bata dijiay bila kissi teradud kay aur yeh bhi keh un maiN aap ko kia khami nazer ayi kiunkeh ho sakta hay issi terah meri kuch islah ho jaey.

aap kay jawab ka muntazir rehuN ga.

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Faizan Bhai kia haal hay umeed hay keh tabiet bakhair ho gi

Aap nay nazm kay mazmoon ko pasand kia bohat shukria

albata kafiay kay silsilay maiN jo misray aap ko Theek nahiN lagay woh zarur bata dijiay bila kissi teradud kay aur yeh bhi keh un maiN aap ko kia khami nazer ayi kiunkeh ho sakta hay issi terah meri kuch islah ho jaey.

aap kay jawab ka muntazir rehuN ga.

Wassalam

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Allah ka baRa karam hy Sohail bhai, aur aap se piary dostoN ki dua'aiN haiN... sab khayriat hy...

Jnab zail maiN kuch sher likh raha huN ap ki nazm meiN se, in ashaar maiN aisa mehsoos hota hy k qaifa pr zor raaha, radeef ki taraf kam tawaju hui...

ye hub-e-mul bana choNchla ameeroN ka,
na choR ja'ay watan to gahreeb kya kha'ay,

bohat adab se kehna chahuN ga k is sher maiN watan choR jany se ghareeb k khany ka taaluq nahi banta...

zuroorateN haiN tumhari k jin ki had hi nahi,
badal sako na chalan to ghareeb kya kha'ay...

aur is sher maiN bhi "ghareeb kya kha'ay" kuch matlab nahi de raha...


maiN ne ye bhi arz ki thi k shayad ye meri kam-fehmi ki waja se ho, lekin jo mehsoos kya wo aap se share kr diya... umeed hy aap ko garaaN na guzra ho ga..

Allah Mola aap ko khush rakhy,

ws-salam
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Faizan bhai
bohat shukria keh aap nay waqt nikal ker baat ki wazahet ker di.

ashaar kay mazameen per kuch roshni Daal deyta huN ager ye wazahet tesseli bakhsh nah lagi to zarur bataiay ga

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ye hub-e-mul bana choNchla ameeroN ka,
na choR ja'ay watan to gahreeb kya kha'ay,


bohat adab se kehna chahuN ga k is sher maiN watan choR jany se ghareeb k khany ka taaluq nahi banta...
is sher ka mozu woh log haiN jo berun-e-mulk mulazimet kay liay jaatay haiN. Jab ghareeb ko apnay waten maiN koi job nah millay aur ager millay bhi to bohet kam ujret per to phir woh rizq ki talash maiN dubai chal jata hay.
issi etebaar say yeh bhi kaha hay keh hub-e-mulk acchi baat hay laikin ab ghareeb sirf is per qanaet nahiN ker sakta aur yeh bhi sirf ameeroN ka chonchala ben ker reh gaya hay.

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zuroorateN haiN tumhari k jin ki had hi nahi,
badal sako na chalan to ghareeb kya kha'ay...

aur is sher maiN bhi "ghareeb kya kha'ay" kuch matlab nahi de raha...


ws-salam
Faizan Ahmad.
yahaN us Islami philosophy ka ziker kia hay keh jis maiN zaruret say zaed Allah ki rah maiN day dainay ka hukem hay laikin daikhaiN keh hamaray muashray maiN kitnay log haiN keh jin kay paas dolat aur saaman kay wasee zakhair majud haiN. Laikin woh ya to islam per yaqeen nahiN rekhtay, ya un kay paas jo kuch bhi mojud hay ussay apni zaruret