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gham sabhi apny roo gai awaaz...

This is a discussion on gham sabhi apny roo gai awaaz... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by asif shahzad very nice sharing buhat umdha ghzal hi Asif bhai mashkur huN k ap ne ghazal ...


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very nice sharing buhat umdha ghzal hi

Asif bhai mashkur huN k ap ne ghazal parhi aur isy pasand kiya...
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lo ga'ey hum bhi kaam se aakhir,
ye gaya hosh wo gai aawaz

zalzaloN ki tabah'kaari miaN
jany kis kis ki so gai aawaz

muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...

Waaaah !
kya khenay hain Faizan
buhat zabardust
buhat umdah
her her shair hi khobsorat hai ,
itni khobsorat ghazal khenay per dheron daad qubool kijiey

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Samra Sahiba is qadar hosla-afzaai k liay behad mamnun huN...
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ruk ga'ay qaaflay, tehar gai shaam
thak ga'ay herf so sai aawaz
lo ga'ay hambhi kaam se aakhir,
ye gya hosh wo gai aawaz

muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...

wah kia kehnay
boht hi khoob or purasar
maqtaa to boht hi khoob raha
boht hi pasand aai dher sari daad
aap ki muntazir hay

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Primitive Bhai bohat bohat shukriya is qadar mahabat ka...
aap dostoN ki hosla afzai hi se likhny ka hosla hota hy...
khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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w/salam..


zabardast hay Faizan bhai... aap manaiN ya na manaiN.. ye ghazal mein nay ussi waqt parh li thi jab aap nay post ki thi.. laikin comments denay ka waqt nahiN mil saka...


buhat hi shandaaar kawish hay... mera zati khayal hay k iss radeef ko nibhana kafi mushkil raha hoga... laikin aap nay ba khoobi ye marhala sar anjaam dey liya.... buhat buhat mubarak baad qabool kijye....

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jnaab ap ka bhi shukriya ada krta huN k aap ne dobara waqt nikaal kr ghazal parhi aur is pr comments sadir kiay...
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zalzaloN ki tabah'kaari miaN
jany kis kis ki so gai aawaz


Kia hee kehnay Faizaan bhaee

Iss derd ko poori shiddat se mehsoos kia hai main ne, Poori ghazal hee munfarid asloob ke hamil hai. Bohat achay

Khush rehiya
shukriya Aatif bhai... ye saniha tha hi itna shadeed k koi dil bhi is ka derd mehsoos kiya baghair na reh saka... her kisi ne kisi na kisi tareeq se is dard ka izhar kiya...


ap ne ghazal parhi, aur isy pasand kiya, is k liay mashkur huN...
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boht umda faizan..kiya shaandaar ghazal kahi hy tum nay.....or radeef qaafiye ka intikhaab bhi boht khoob raha..aik boht hi umda ghazal perhwany pr boht saari daad humari bhi ho
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boht umda faizan..kiya shaandaar ghazal kahi hy tum nay.....or radeef qaafiye ka intikhaab bhi boht khoob raha..aik boht hi umda ghazal perhwany pr boht saari daad humari bhi ho....
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boht umda faizan..kiya shaandaar ghazal kahi hy tum nay.....or radeef qaafiye ka intikhaab bhi boht khoob raha..aik boht hi umda ghazal perhwany pr boht saari daad humari