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ruk ga'ay qaaflay, tehar gai shaam
thak ga'ay herf so sai aawaz
lo ga'ay hambhi kaam se aakhir,
ye gya hosh wo gai aawaz

muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...

wah kia kehnay
boht hi khoob or purasar
maqtaa to boht hi khoob raha
boht hi pasand aai dher sari daad
aap ki muntazir hay

sab say pehla sher jo red color main mention kia hay
us ki urdu composing main proof ki ghalti hay
zara drust frma lain
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As-Salam-o-Alaikum dosto!

kuch arsa pelay aik ghazal hui thi, aj ap k samny pesh hy...
parhi'ay aur tabsara fermaai'ay...


:::: in roman ::::

gham sabhi apny ro gai awaaz,
chup ka daaman bhigo gai awaaz

shor hy khaamshi k aangan maiN,
beij kesy ye bo gai aawaz

ruk ga'ay qaaflay, tehar gai shaam
thak ga'ay herf so sai aawaz

mery kuch bolnay se pehlay hi,
us ki janib ki ho gai aawaz

lo ga'ay hambhi kaam se aakhir,
ye gya hosh wo gai aawaz

zalzaloN ki tabah'kaari miaN
jany kis kis ki so gai aawaz

muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...

:::: :::: :::: ::::



Allah Mola aap sab ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...


w/salam..


zabardast hay Faizan bhai... aap manaiN ya na manaiN.. ye ghazal mein nay ussi waqt parh li thi jab aap nay post ki thi.. laikin comments denay ka waqt nahiN mil saka...


buhat hi shandaaar kawish hay... mera zati khayal hay k iss radeef ko nibhana kafi mushkil raha hoga... laikin aap nay ba khoobi ye marhala sar anjaam dey liya.... buhat buhat mubarak baad qabool kijye....

Wassalam
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zalzaloN ki tabah'kaari miaN
jany kis kis ki so gai aawaz


Kia hee kehnay Faizaan bhaee

Iss derd ko poori shiddat se mehsoos kia hai main ne, Poori ghazal hee munfarid asloob ke hamil hai. Bohat achay

Khush rehiya
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shor hai khamshi ke aangan mai-n

beej yeh kaise bo gai awaz


lajawab ghazal......har sher apni jagah khoobsurat.bahut sari daad is ghazal ke liye.

Noor Sahiba bohat shukriya ghazal ko sraah'ny ka..
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Very nice aur maqtaa to behadd shandar hai...
muntazar kab kisi ki thi Faizan
us ko jana tha, so gai aawaz...Dher sari dad qabol kijiye...@};-
Kanwal Sahiba be-had shukriya ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur daad k liay...
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v nice buhat achi kavish
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thanks a lot Shazlay Hassan sahiba, k aap ko ghazal pasand aai,
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