Urdu Poetry Forum

Composed By: Adnan Sahib


GHAM NAHI AIK AASRA HAY ABHI

NA HO DUNIYA MAIRA KHUDA HAY ABHI

DIL MAI'N IK DARD SA UTHA HAY ABHI

KIYA KOI HAADSA HUA HAY ABHI

KAISAY DAIKHAI'N NAZAR UTHA KAY MUJHAY

SAAMNAY UN KAY AAINA HAY ABHI

JAANAY KIS KI NIGAAH UTHI HAY

DIL PAY IK TEER SA LAGA HA ABHI

IS QADAR HAY SUKOOT MOWJO'N MAI'N

JAISAY SAAHIL PAY KUCH HUA HAY ABHI

SUEY MANZIL QADAM BARHAO '' HÁYA ''

WAQT AAWAAZ DAY RAHA HAY ABHI

(Háya)

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Good work................ .......acha khayal aur alfaaz ka istimaal hay per aik baat kahoon ga ka khayal ka taasalsool kaem nahi raha i hope k mind nahi kia hoga tum nay ya...........overall humesha ki tarah aik shaandar kooshish hay.

wasalam

Ather

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arary waaaaaaaah haya kamal kardita aap ne to
main ne is ghazal ko parh kar jo baat aap k liye
mehsoos ki kahey deti hoon k aap ne waqai bohut
tezi se khub se khoob tar likhne ki manzil
tay karli hai aap ne daad kabool farmaaye maza agay
parh kar waah

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waah waah waah,,,bhai wah waah waah,,kiya kahnay hain,,,boht khoob,,boht hi umda,,,,,,,,,dil say hota huwa sar e mizgaan,,aa k ik karwan ruka hay abhi,,,,,kiya kahnay hain ,,lutf aagaya hy,,,,,,boht khoob,,saahb boht hi khoob,,,,mujhay is waqt is share ny itna lutf diya hy k haya ji aapka boht shukria,,,,,,,,,,,,y e poori ghaza aik murassa ghazal hay,,,bila shuba aik shah kaar hay,,snipper bhai ki baat pr mujhay shadeed hayrat hoi k unhain khayal k tasulsul main kahn kami nazar aai,,,,khayal ki to itni umda bunat hoi hay atlay say meqtay tak k kiya kahnay hain aap k,,,,,,,,,aik mertaba phir waah waah,,agar aap ijaazat dain gi to hum isay apnay jareday main publish kerna chahain gay,,,,

itni khoobsoorat ghazal perh kr dil krta hy aik mertaba or reply likhon,,kuch share ab dobara khulay hain,,dil main derd sa utha hay abhi,,,kiya koi haadsa huwa hay abhi,,,is share main lehja ki ghan graj ,,,,kiya baat hay ,,,,yehi kamaal hota aik achi ghazal ka or achay share ka,,,,aap kaee din tak us k sahr say nikal nahi patay,,,,,,mera khiyal hy k kuch din humaray bhi gaaiy,,,,,,,,,,tamaa m hg walon ko main ye kahta hon k ye hay ghazal,,,,,saadgi say bari baat kahdayna,,,na koi mushkil lafz na koi koi tarkeeb ki bandhaai,,,,,,,,,ab is main koi bhi nuqs ho,,,,yaroo ye ghazal hy,,isi ko ghazal kahtay hain,,,,haya aapka aik mertaba or shukria,,,,jo humain acha share sunaday usay salaam,,,

ghum nahi ik aasra hay abhi
na ho dunya mayra khuda hay abhi

bohut khob haya siso , bohut bohut achi lagi ap ki yah kawish
ALLAH ap k takheal ki parwaz ko or bulandayin ata farmay aamen

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wow zaberdast hayan waqai main buhat acha likha apnay v nice
wish u all the best

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bahot khoob Haya,aek aor be had khoobsurat ghazal aap ki tarf se parney ko mili,bahot lutf mila yeh ghazal par ke,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
aap ki is ghazal ke doosarey shair ne...Nasir Kazmi ki aek bahot khoobsurat ghazal ki yaad dila di,....jo kuchh yoon hai ke...

dil me.n ik lahar sii uThii hai abhii
ko_ii taazaa havaa chalii hai abhii

is khoobsurat ghazal par aek baar phir daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,

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