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**Haya n** · #11 11-18-2006, 10:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Spark

Good work Ms. H...bhut achi haay

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**Haya n** · #12 11-18-2006, 10:43 PM

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Originally Posted by zain

bahot khoob Haya,aek aor be had khoobsurat ghazal aap ki tarf se parney ko mili,bahot lutf mila yeh ghazal par ke,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
aap ki is ghazal ke doosarey shair ne...Nasir Kazmi ki aek bahot khoobsurat ghazal ki yaad dila di,....jo kuchh yoon hai ke...

dil me.n ik lahar sii uThii hai abhii
ko_ii taazaa havaa chalii hai abhii

is khoobsurat ghazal par aek baar phir daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,

Aap Ka Reply Read Kar Kay Bouhat Khushi Hui...Ghazal Aap Ko Pasand Aai Owr Aap Kay Maiyaar Par Poori Utri Is Baat Ki Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui .... Itni Pazeerai Owr Howsla Afzai Ka Bouhat Qubool Kijiye

**Haya n** · #13 11-18-2006, 10:45 PM

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Originally Posted by shazlay

wow zaberdast hayan waqai main buhat acha likha apnay v nice
wish u all the best

Aap Hamaisha Mairi Howsla Afzai Karti Hai'n...Bouhat Bouhat Khush Rahiye ...

**Haya n** · #14 11-18-2006, 10:47 PM

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Originally Posted by chariagy-aakhir-shub

ghum nahi ik aasra hay abhi
na ho dunya mayra khuda hay abhi

bohut khob haya siso , bohut bohut achi lagi ap ki yah kawish
ALLAH ap k takheal ki parwaz ko or bulandayin ata farmay aamen

Aap Ko Ghazal Pasand Aai Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui...Itnay Howsla Afza Reply Owr Duao'n Ka Bouhat Shukria... Bouhat Khush Rahiye Aameen

**Haya n** · #15 11-18-2006, 10:56 PM

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Originally Posted by saahir

itni khoobsoorat ghazal perh kr dil krta hy aik mertaba or reply likhon,,kuch share ab dobara khulay hain,,dil main derd sa utha hay abhi,,,kiya koi haadsa huwa hay abhi,,,is share main lehja ki ghan graj ,,,,kiya baat hay ,,,,yehi kamaal hota aik achi ghazal ka or achay share ka,,,,aap kaee din tak us k sahr say nikal nahi patay,,,,,,mera khiyal hy k kuch din humaray bhi gaaiy,,,,,,,,,,tamaa m hg walon ko main ye kahta hon k ye hay ghazal,,,,,saadgi say bari baat kahdayna,,,na koi mushkil lafz na koi koi tarkeeb ki bandhaai,,,,,,,,,ab is main koi bhi nuqs ho,,,,yaroo ye ghazal hy,,isi ko ghazal kahtay hain,,,,haya aapka aik mertaba or shukria,,,,jo humain acha share sunaday usay salaam,,,

Aap Kay Dono'n Replies Read Kiye Hai'n...Sach Baat Yahi Hay Kay Mairi To Samajh Mai'n Nahi Aa Raha Kay Mai'n Kiya Reply Likhu'n? Kis Tarha Shukria Ada Karoo'n? Mujhay Bouhat Ziyada Khushi Hui Hay Aap Kay Replies Say...Aap Nay Jis Tarha Ghazal Ko Saraha Hay Owr Jis Tarha Howsla Afzaai Ki Hay Woh Bazaat-e-Khud Apni Jagha Bouhat Qabil-e-Tareef Hay Aap Ki Itni Ziyada Howsla Afzaai Nay Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Bakhshi Hay Owr Aik Dharka Sa Bhi Hay Kay Pata Nahi Owr Kawishai'n Bhi Aap Kay Maiyaar Par Poori Utarti Hai'n Kay Nahi? Shukria To Mujhay Aap Ka Ada Karna Hay Kay Aap Nay Bouhat Bharpoor Andaaz Mai'n Howsla Afzaai Ki Hay... Aap Kay Is Behtreen Reply Ka Bouhat Khush Rahiye Aameen

**Haya n** · #16 11-18-2006, 11:04 PM

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Originally Posted by saahir

waah waah waah,,,bhai wah waah waah,,kiya kahnay hain,,,boht khoob,,boht hi umda,,,,,,,,,dil say hota huwa sar e mizgaan,,aa k ik karwan ruka hay abhi,,,,,kiya kahnay hain ,,lutf aagaya hy,,,,,,boht khoob,,saahb boht hi khoob,,,,mujhay is waqt is share ny itna lutf diya hy k haya ji aapka boht shukria,,,,,,,,,,,,y e poori ghaza aik murassa ghazal hay,,,bila shuba aik shah kaar hay,,snipper bhai ki baat pr mujhay shadeed hayrat hoi k unhain khayal k tasulsul main kahn kami nazar aai,,,,khayal ki to itni umda bunat hoi hay atlay say meqtay tak k kiya kahnay hain aap k,,,,,,,,,aik mertaba phir waah waah,,agar aap ijaazat dain gi to hum isay apnay jareday main publish kerna chahain gay,,,,

Poet Club Mai'n Itnay Sahib-e-Zowq Logo'n Ki Aamad Ki Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui Hay...Aap Ka Yeh Reply Bhi Howsla Afzai Say Bharpoor Hay... Aap Ko Ghazal Pasand Aai Yeh Mairay Liye Bouhat Hi Khushi Ki Baat Hay...Mai'n Aap Ka Shukria Ada Nahi Kar Sakti Jis Qadar Aap Nay Is Ghazal Ko Saraha Hay...

Mai'n Yeh Ghazal Aap Ko Hi Dedicate Karti Hoo'n.... Ab Yeh Ghazal Aap Ki Hui... Aap Ko Jo Munasib Lagay Woh Kijiye...Aap Kay Reply Ka ... Bouhat Khush Rahiye...

**Haya n** · #17 11-18-2006, 11:08 PM

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Originally Posted by rida jabeen

arary waaaaaaaah haya kamal kardita aap ne to
main ne is ghazal ko parh kar jo baat aap k liye
mehsoos ki kahey deti hoon k aap ne waqai bohut
tezi se khub se khoob tar likhne ki manzil
tay karli hai aap ne daad kabool farmaaye maza agay
parh kar waah

Aap Ka Reply Parh Kar Hamaisha Ki Tarha Dil Bouhat Khush Ho Gaya... Aap Kabhi Howsla Afzai Karnay Mai'n Peechay Nahi Rehtee'n...(hehe) Maana Kay Ghazal Aap Ko Bouhat Pasand Aai Hay But Is Mai'n Itna Make-Up Karnay Ki Kiya Zaroorat Thi? (hehe)

**Haya n** · #18 11-18-2006, 11:16 PM

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Originally Posted by MEHTAB

Buhat khoobsurat Ghazal hay haya
Aik umdah tehrer parhne ko mile hay hamesha ki tarah
hamari janib se buhat si daad qabool kijiay
Khush Rahiay

Aap Hamaisha Mairi Bouhat Howsla Afzaai Kartay Hai'n...Ghazal Aap Ko Pasand Aai Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui....Itnay Howsla Afza Reply Ka Bouhat Qubool Kijiye..Bouhat Khush Rahiye... Aameen

**Muhammad Mohcin** · #19 11-19-2006, 10:19 AM

HAYA MashaAllah Bohut Bohut Khoobsoorat Ghazal Kahi hai Aap nay
Bohut Dino'n Baad LaJawaab Kar Denay Wali Koi Bohut Achi Gazal Perhi
Bohut Acha Laga

KEEP IT UP!

**Haya n** · #20 11-19-2006, 10:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Muhammad Mohcin

HAYA MashaAllah Bohut Bohut Khoobsoorat Ghazal Kahi hai Aap nay
Bohut Dino'n Baad LaJawaab Kar Denay Wali Koi Bohut Achi Gazal Perhi
Bohut Acha Laga

KEEP IT UP!

Aap Ka Reply Read Kar Kay Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui..Ghazal Ki Pasand'Deedgi Owr Itnay Howsla Afza Reply Ka Bouhat Qubool Kijiye...

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