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Gazal -- mumkin kahaN hay rokni yalghar e Media

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عزیز دوستو
آپ کی خدمت میں ایک غیر روایتی غزل لے کر حاضر ہوا ہوں
اس غزل میں عام بول چال میں استعمال ہونے والےانگریزی اور اردو کےچند ایسے الفاظ آے ہیں جو غزل کے لیٔے غیر معروف ہونے کی وجہ سے آپ کو اجنبی ضرور لگیں گے لیکن ذرا فکر کیجیٔے کہ کیا وہ اپنی نشست میں اپنا کام ٹھیک سے کر رہے ہیں۔ کیا ان کے بغیر ادایگی ءِ مفہوم ممکن تھی۔ اور کیا اِن الفاظ کے استعمال سے شاعری کی خوبصورتی مجروح ہؤی ہے اور اگر ہاں تو کیسے

ان الفاظ کے استعمال کے علاوہ جو دوسرا تجربہ کیا ہے وہ اردو الفاظ کی فارسی کے طریقے سے انگریزی لفظ کے ساتھ ترکیب بنانے کا ہے ۔ یہ آپ کو کیسا لگا اِس پر بھی ضرور روشنی ڈالیے

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bahot khoob janaab,aap ka yeh andaaz bhi bahot achha laga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Kahee'n Kisi Kami Ka Koi Aehsaas Nahi Huwa Bcz Aap Nay Koi Kami Rehnay Hi Nahi Di...Bouhat Khoob...Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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bohat acha laga Sohail.............. .....app es mein kamyab bhi ho gay hain
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Sohail Bhai, bohot hi umda, mukhtalif aur munfarid ghazar parhne ko mili aap ki janib se, jitni iski zaban achooti hai, utna hi iska lehja besakhta aur chonka dene wala hai aur utna hi iska mazmoon shandar aur hasb-e-haal hai, overall ghazal parh kar bohot lutf mila, bohot si daad is shandar aur unique kaawish ki nazr hai
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عزیز دوستو
آپ کی خدمت میں ایک غیر روایتی غزل لے کر حاضر ہوا ہوں
اس غزل میں عام بول چال میں استعمال ہونے والےانگریزی اور اردو کےچند ایسے الفاظ آے ہیں جو غزل کے لیٔے غیر معروف ہونے کی وجہ سے آپ کو اجنبی ضرور لگیں گے لیکن ذرا فکر کیجیٔے کہ کیا وہ اپنی نشست میں اپنا کام ٹھیک سے کر رہے ہیں۔ کیا ان کے بغیر ادایگی ءِ مفہوم ممکن تھی۔ اور کیا اِن الفاظ کے استعمال سے شاعری کی خوبصورتی مجروح ہؤی ہے اور اگر ہاں تو کیسے

ان الفاظ کے استعمال کے علاوہ جو دوسرا تجربہ کیا ہے وہ اردو الفاظ کی فارسی کے طریقے سے انگریزی لفظ کے ساتھ ترکیب بنانے کا ہے ۔ یہ آپ کو کیسا لگا اِس پر بھی ضرور روشنی ڈالیے

آُپ کے بے لاگ تبصرے کا منتظر

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wah sohail sahab aap ne tu media ko sahi muqam per laker khara kardiya au apka andaz bhi bohat khoob tha aik mukammil andaz main ghazal likhi bohat sari daad qubool kejye
apna khayal rakhyega