Urdu Poetry Forum

wah.... kuch khuab hi tau thay .... adhoray khuab

wah Bohat umda .. @};-

bai wah...
kiya achi nazm kahi hy ap ne... dil khush kr diya... Jeety raho yar... Allah Mola aur ata kary...

aur haN, mery li'ay bhi dua kiay kareN....

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Aik lamha jee aap ki poem parhi dil shiddate jazbaat se bhar aaya hai ke aaj bhi hamari community bohat achi nazmain likh rehi hai.Mohsin Naqvi dore rawan ke azeem shayr the mere nazdeek. unki bohat see nazmain aisi hain jin pe meri ankhain aksar namnak ho jati hain aaj arsa baad aap ki nazam parh ke bhi aankhen purani adten dohrane pe bazidd hain.main aap ki iss nazam ki tareef nehin karun ga kiun ke mere paas alfaaz nehin iss ke lie.iss dua ke saath ijazat chahun ga k Khuda aap ko Nazr-e-bad se bachaye or isi tarah likhne ki himmat ata farmaye(ameen)Silent Emotions

is ki samjhe a gayi hai is liye tareef bhi ker deti hoon
waisay u ko tareef ki zarorat to nahi is mamlay mai..i mean sirf poetry mai
as alwayzz bohatt acha likha...hg ke ghalib saab @};-

Faqat kuch khaab he to thay ...


Zabaradast ... @};-

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Thanks Minno.... @};-

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Thanks Ham bhai.... pizirayee ka buhat buhat shukriya... @};-

Thanks tanhayee.... @};-

khush raho @};-