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~*~ ek shaam ~*~

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Old 07-25-2004, 01:11 AM
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~*~ ek shaam ~*~


ye us shaam jaisi ek shaam hai
barasti boondoon mein bhi ek paighaam hai
hawa nai shokhi sai kaha suno to
tumhari hansi mein bhi shamil
kisi ka naam hai

us shaam bhi yunhi ghata jhoom kar ai thi
barish ki rhim jhim nai aik dhun sajai thi
mere dil ki dharkanoon mein shamil theen
shabnam mein lipteen tumhari batain
us shaam bhi yunhi tum nai ek baat sunai thi

us shaam pyar sai thama tha tum nai hath
bahar nai rahoon mein keh kashaan bichai thi
yunhi ankhoon mein dekh kar haulai sai
kaha tha tum nai
is barish mein hai meri chahat ki parchai bhi

us shaam kai bheegai lamhoon mein
khawaboon sai raat sajai thi
tanha chand kai angan mein
khawaishoon ki bahar phir ai thi
mein yunhi khud mein khoi si khud sai bhi sharmai thi

us shaam kai dhaltai sai mein
jab udasi har soo chai thi
yun tanha chor kar janai par
jab ank meri bhar ai thi
tum nai kaha tha mujhse sai
is rhim jhim kai sang rehna tum
hai is mein meri mohabbat ki rehnumai bhi

aaj bhi aik aisi hi shaam hai
mein nai barish mein likha tumhara naam hai
hathoon ki lakeeroon mein dekha hai
chehra tumhara
meri har dua mein shamil dil ka paighaam hai....../rose

khush rahain sab
/aoa

umeed hai mizaaj bakhair hongey

aur nazm aapki parhi.........bohut achchi......bohut cute si.bohut roomaniyatbliye huwe.balkey aapki sari nazmein jo ab tak main ney parhi hain.roomaniat se bharpoor hoti hain..../flowers

is ki koi khas wajah ya aap ko isi pe likhna achcha lagta hai

khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye

/AH
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Old 07-25-2004, 02:14 AM
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Diyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaa

wah......... jaani bohot hi piyari si nazm... hameesha ki terhaa... bohot hi nafees jazboon se arastaa..... lafzon ko pholoon ki terha pirooya hai...@};-

bohot hi achi lagi...

hameeesha khush rahoo...ameen
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buhat khoob diya ..


sada khush Rahian .. Ameen
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Old 07-25-2004, 11:40 AM
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/yhug meri pyari si dost bohat hi pyari nazam hey bikul tum jesi /flowers

/dontsee

hia kanwal itnai pyar sai tareef ki hai kya kahoon mein /dontsee


bas yunhi meri hausla afzai karti rehna tum /hug2

khush raho hamesha
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Old 07-25-2004, 11:50 AM
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Salamz Janu JEE !!
Kaise hein aap ?? hope thek thaak... mein kafi arsay se apna id login karnay ki try ker rahi thi leekin ho nahi raha tha.. dont knw y , aaj jab aap online milli aur aap nay bola k wapis aao toh mein nay aik dafa phir try kiya and YUPEE ! KAM BAN GAYA !!!
Yeh phir aap ka khuloos he tha naa.... Love u sweetie....

Khair.. coming to the poem... abb kya tareef karon iss ki mein.. buhut he aala buhut he zabardast buhut buht buhut ziada achi likhi hai...Alfaaz kam hein iss ki tareef karnay ko...
Really a very OUTSTANDING piece !
Keep writing....
Khush rhaiye
Abaad rahiye...
Love ya..
Fi-amanAllah
wsalaam chanda /hug2

mein theek hoon shonai tum sunao...bauhat hi acha lag raha hai tumhein yahan wapas dekh kar aur jaani tumhein to pata hai tumharai bina hg bhi adhora adhora sa lagta hai....bauhat miss kiya tha tumhein jab tum nahi theen yahan lekin ab agai ho to sukoon sai rehna samjhi /rose

nazam tumhein pasand ai hai yehi kafi hai mere liyai yunhi hausla afzai karti rehna aur hamesha khush rehna

Khuda tumhein kamyab karai ameen sum ameen /dua

/rose
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Old 07-25-2004, 11:52 AM
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Wah tinii winii kia hii kahney,,,,,,,,parh kar maza hii aa giya ,,,,,,,,yunhii laga jeysey pizza key saath coffee pee hoo,,,,,,, ;;)
barisheyn to yahaan ho rahii heyn roz hii honey laggi heyn aur likh dala tum ney itnaa lajawab bohut hii khoob ,,,,,,,,,,,, @};-
khush raho sadda @};- @};- @};-

taiz gaam ;;)

lo karlo baat phir coffee pata hai jis hisaab sai aap coffee peetai hian na us hisaab sai aap coffee machine ban jain gai /khikhi

tauba tauba pizza and coffee tum aur tumhari combinations :-p

janab barish ka mausam mujhe pasand hai so us par likhti rehti hoon mein jab bhi mood banai

khushi hui aap ko nazam pasand ai

khush rahiyai
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Old 07-25-2004, 11:53 AM
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very nice /rose

tareef ka shukriya

khush rahiyai @};-
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buhat khoob diya


hamesha ki lajawab @};-


khush raho hamesha
amna chanda /hug2

khushi hui tumhein nazam pasand ai

yunhi mera hausla barhati rehna aur khush raho hamesha /dontsee
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