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This is a discussion on ek dukh bhari chand raat within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ek raat ki hai baat aao batata hoon tumhein us chand raat ki ek daastaan sunata hoon tumhein main guzar ...
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| ek raat ki hai baat aao batata hoon tumhein us chand raat ki ek daastaan sunata hoon tumhein main guzar raha tha ek sadak sunsaan sey tarey bhi jhaank rahey they us raat aasmaan sey guzra jo main ek qabaristaan key paas sey aawaaz aa rahi thi kuch us biyaban sey dekha jo mainey jhaank kar to hairan ho gaya do bachchon ko wahan dekh kar pasheyman ho gaya bachey jo they liptey hue ek taaza qabr sey jab woh kuch keh rahey they to baj rahey they saaz sey bachey ney kaha aap kya naaraz ho gayey jo aa key yoon aisi tanhai mein so gayey ghar pey hain bohot log zikr aap ka hi hai humko to intizaar bus aap ka hi hai ghar pey nahin hai chain na maa ko qarar hai unka to ro ro key bohot bura haal hai bachcha keh raha tha ghar aa jao papa warna guzar jaeygi yeh raat aa jaoo jaldi sey tum kyon ki kal eid hai, aaj hai chand raat. pls try to understand the situation of these childrens.yeh koi nazm nahin hai ek afsoos naak baat hai, yeh nazm mainey pakiza aanchal ki ek nazm sey mutaassir ho kar likhney ki koshish ki hai ,uska theme bhi yahi hai.koi ghalti ho to maaf kar dijiyehga. mudassir ali khan. |
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#4
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| Sad.......
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#6
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| salam bohoot acha likha hay app nay ... waqaii nazm main dard hay ... shukriya share kernay ka tahir
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#7
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| bauhat achi nazam likhi hai aap nai ![]() khush rahiyai ![]()
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#8
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| aap sub ka shukriya, par main chahta hoon aur opinions milein |
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#9
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| wah janab ...bohat hassas si nazm hay bohat khoob khush raheye likhte raheye
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