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RulesThis is a discussion on Duniyadaar aur fankaar within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Duniyadaar aur Fankaar Duniyadaar Fankaar Say Tu bhi kabhi muskurayaa hota Is jahaaN ka khuda jo apnayaa hota Bheer main ...
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08-17-2006, 10:49 PM
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Duniyadaar aur Fankaar Duniyadaar Fankaar Say Tu bhi kabhi muskurayaa hota Is jahaaN ka khuda jo apnayaa hota Bheer main phirta beshaql bun kar Aur izzat ka makhota lagyaa hota Jamaal-e-fan-e-zindagi say na-ashna rehta Aur khyaal balNdioN pay na layaa hota Zauq-e-talab is jahaaN main jurm hai sadioN say Is jurm pay tujhko na pyaar aayaa hota Befiqr ki masti main phir tu bhi raqs karta Riwayaut ko jo khuda tunay banaayaa hota ---######----- Fankaar Duniyadaar Say Meri duniya main jo ik baar tu aayaa hota To yeh reham toonay khud pay hi khayaa hota HoNth phail jaanay ko hi tu haNsi samjhay Masrrat ko itna to na girayaa hota Miltay jo balaNdioN pay basay shffaaf zehan Apnay aleel fulsphoN pay sharm khayaa hota Dekhta jo tu meri masarrat ki parvaazaiN Larkhraatay kadamoN pay apnay na itna itraayaa hota Samajh paataa tu jo vehshi say insaaN bannay ka safar To zauq-e-talab ko duniya nay na juram banayaa hota Ik baar phir chal diya uqta kay woh daanaa Main hi kaash teri mehfil main na aayaa hota --------------------------------
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08-18-2006, 06:35 PM
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bahot khoob janaab,aap ki yeh nazam bhi bahot khoob rahi,  bahot khush rahiye,likhte rahiye. 1.gif ")1")
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08-18-2006, 07:54 PM
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Bouhat Khoob...Masha Allah Aap Bouhat Ba Salahiyat Hai'n... 
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08-18-2006, 08:24 PM
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HoNth phail jaanay ko hi tu haNsi samjhay Masrrat ko itna to na girayaa hota wah.........bohat hi khoob.. bohat khoobsurat nazam kahi bhai aap nay keep sharing
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08-18-2006, 10:04 PM
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I am moved by such very warm expression of appreciation from all of u.If my poems make u pause,think and agin pause n think,that is the reward of my poem. Thanx |
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08-19-2006, 05:53 PM
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wah bohat khoob zabdast likha hey. keep writing humeri traf se dhairon dadh qabool kijiya. ALLAH ap ko sada kush rakhay. Ameen Sum Ameen
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08-20-2006, 12:23 AM
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Wasim bhai,I am very thankfu for the warm words appreciation. Brijidner"Sagar' |
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08-20-2006, 08:40 AM
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bohat khoob , daad wasool ki jiyay ........
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08-21-2006, 08:53 AM
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Duniyadaar aur fankaar 
