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This is a discussion on dunia se shikaayat hai na tujh hi se khafa hoon within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ASLAAM O ALEKUM dosto, kesey mizaaj hain?umeed hai bakher honge, lijiye aek baar phir is khoobsurat mehfil main aek taaza ...
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| ASLAAM O ALEKUM dosto, kesey mizaaj hain?umeed hai bakher honge, ![]() lijiye aek baar phir is khoobsurat mehfil main aek taaza ghazal ke saath haazir hoon,(merey khayaal main ghazal hi hai), umeed hai bardaasht karain ge,![]() aap ki bahot qeemati aara ka intazaar rahey ga,umeed hai mayoos naheen karain ge, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ALLAH NIGEHBAAN. ![]()
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| Buhat khoob likha Zain aap nay khush rahiye
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#3
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![]() Kisi Aik Shair Ko Quote Karna Mumkin Nahi Is Liye Kay Matlay Say MaqtayTak Her Her Shair Hi Bouhat Umdagi Say Likha Gaya Hay...Jab Bhi Aap Ka Likha Read Karti Hoo'n Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hoti Hay Kay Waqt Kay Saath Saath Aap Kis Qadar Pukhtagi Owr Manjhay Huway Andaaz Mai'n Likhnay Lagay Hai'n...Ghazal Parh Kay Bouhat Mutasir Hui...Aik Aik Shair Kay Liye Daad Qubool Kijiye...Sada Khush Rahiye... ...+ )
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| Hi. mashallah bhut khubsurat ghazal hai last shair mein zindagi ki hakeekat beyan ker de bhut se daad kabool kiejeya khush rahian Yasmin Yasi |
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#5
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| wha................. ... kia batt hi buhat umdha ghzal hi app ki buhat umdha............... .....
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#6
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| ik ashk-e-nadamat tha, sar-e-khaak gira huN..... bohat umda, subhaAllah, wah, yar kya misra trasha hy zain bhai, ye misra to khud meiN aik mukamal sher hy... baei bohat hi khoob.... dheroN dheroN daad is misry ki nazr... mashroot rahi teri nigahoN se meri zeest, ik pal meiN jia huN to maiN ik pal meiN mara huN.... baei wah, kya kehny haiN, bohat khoob, yar kya sher keh diya hy aap ne, lutf aa gya eman se.... baei meri taraf se dheer sari daad is achy aur mukamal sher ki nazr... aap ki is ghazal ne to taza dam kr diya... sari ghazal hi bohat achi hy, lekin ye misra aur ye sher sari gahzal meiN numayaN nazer aa raha hy, meri janib se is qadar umda ghazal kehny pr bohat si daad hazir hy, qubool kreN... isi trha khoob se khoob-ter likhty raheN, aur ham se share kty raheN... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN, aabad raheN....
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| palko'n pe jagah payee, na daman mein basa hon ik ashk-e-nadamat tha, sar-e-khaat gira hoon wahhhhhh.. Ishtiaq sahib.. iss baar to kamal hi ker dala.. kya khoobsoorat ghazal takhleeq ki.. her her shair qabil-e-tareef, radeef aur qafiye ka saath bhi khoob nibhaya.. lutaf aayaa.. mundarja bala shair hasil-e-ghazal raha.. dhairo'n daad aap ki iss behtreen kawish ki nazr.. Bohat Nawazish ![]() wafa aur dua ke saath withlove ![]()
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#8
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| wahh ...zain sb wahh ki asama bandha aap ne khob..aik aik lazf aik dosaray k liye lazim motiyun ki khobsorat lari jaisa...kisi aik shair ko dad k qabil nain balkeh pori ghazal he dil moh lainay wali hai....waqee shandar bohat khoob....likhtay rahin Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur zyadah.[.Aamin] ![]() |