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Salam brother-e-bazurgwaar,

Aaj pehli baar mujhay apni kisi tehreer par is qadar pur maghaz aur mukhlisaana hadd tak faseeh naaqidaana raey parhnay kaa moqa mila, janab aik to arz yeh karna hay k main koi pukhta kaar aur qaadir-ul-kalam shaair to hoon nahin, main to mehaz dil main uthnay wali teson ko haroof kaa jaama pehna kar doston kay saamnay paish kar daita hoon, aur woh kamaal meharbaani say meri kotaahion ki nishaandehi kar kay mujhay shukriye ka moqa faraham kartay hain, choonke ustaadi ka koi daawa nahin is liye ghaltion ki gunjaaish bhi dosron kay muqaablay main fazooN tar ho gi, aur main mashkoor hoon kay aap jaisi moatabar hasti nay meri adbi aghlaat ki nishaandahi farmaai, adbi hawaley say main tajurbi asloob par apnay aap ko maail pata hoon, tajurad jis ka aik laazma hay, main qadeem banjar ko bhi itna hi mohtram o muqadam samajhta hoon jitna jadeed lisaani tashkeelaat aur esteaaron ko, qadeem urdu main mustemal estaaron kay pehloo ba pehloo agar ham jadeed tasawuraat aur tashkeelaat ko bhi jaga dain to meray khiyaal kay mutaabiq kaafi takhleeqi jehaat waa ho sakti hain, main apnay taeen yeh yaqeen bhi rakhta hoon kay qaari ko kabhi bhi underestimate nahin karna chaaheye, qaari ki samajhnay ki salahiyat par bharosa kartay huey agar usay kuch mawaad aisa bhi day diya jaaey jis say woh sochnay par majboor ho to kiya he behtar ho, kiyunke is tarah us kay zehen ki partain to khulti he hain laiken saath saath he kai naey zaaviye, naey asloob aur naey aahang saamnay aatay hain, jo bazat-e-khud adab ki nabzon main naei zindagee kaa baais ho sakta hay, ,,,,,,, aap nay kaha kay aap khuda ko us ki tajreed k baais maantay hain to main to mahaz itna jaanta hoon kay jab maan liya to phir kisi wajoob ki zaroorat nahin rehti, kiyunke woh to maan lainay say pehli kay lawaazmaat main aata hay, jee, aap nay kaha kay meray misron main jholeedgi paaei jaati hay to main to khud aap kay is lafz "jholeedgi" say mehzooz hua hoon, aur isay aap ki takhleeqi salaahiyat ki lan taraani samajhta hoon, main kisi bhi excuse kay baghair is baat ko qabool karta hoon kay meri kaavish ghaltion say khaali nahin hay, aur main to khud urdu main apnay aap ko is qaabil nahin samajhta kay likh sakoon yeh to doston nay majboor kiya to likhna shuroo kiya aur dost bhi meri tarah urdu ki haqeeqi baareekiyon say koson door thay is liye meri har ghalat tehreer par bhi daad-o-tehseen ki nawaazshain kartay rahay, mother language punjabi hay, umeed hay aap meri majboori ko samajh gaey hon gay, aur rahi baat kisi ustaad say islaah lainay ki to aajkal lahore main jis qisam kay ustaad miltay hain, un say islaah kam aur aik doosray kay baray main gilay shikway, galam galoch ka dars ziyaada mil sakta hay, is liye is dasht ki siyaahi mai kisi ustaad say is tarah bidakta hoon jaisay koi tifel kisi ghair maree makhlooq say, aap jaisay baaligh-un-nazar say main umeed rakhtaa hoon kay aap is baarey main meri rahnumaai farmaa kar mujhay minnat kash-e-ehsaan zaroor karain gay, Bohat si duaaon ka nazrana.














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Salaam!

Bhai musafir... kya baat hai... aapka andaaz to ghazab lagta hai.... kya zabaan hai... kya lafz chunte hain aap... jee khush ho gaya aapki tehreer
ko parh kar... aapne bataya ke aapki maadri zabaan punjabi hai aur iske bawajood aap jis tarah se urdu ko barat rahe hain... kamaal hai! Janab aisa hai ke hum aap ki baaton se pori tarah ittefaaq karte hain aur bas itna kehna chahte hain ke... aap jis safar pe poore josh ke saath gaamzan hain, hum bhi usi safar pe nikle huye hain aur maze ki baat to ye hai ke jangalon aur maidaanon me der se bhatak rahe hain, khushi hoti hai! Lijiye do sher yaad aa gaye... sun lijiye... nida faazli kehte hain

apni talaash apni nazar, apna tajraba
ho chahe rasta saaf bhatak jana chahiye

aur.... aapke ahmad mushtaq sahab..

naye deewano ko dekhein to khushi hoti hai
hum bhi aise hi the jab aaye the veerane me!

sach much khushi ho rahi hai aapse yun ru ba ru hote huye... aur sach kahon to aap hume koi naye deewane to kisi tarah nahin dikhlayee dete... aapka kehna ke jab maan liya to phir kisi aur baat ke liye jageh kahan reh jaati... bilkul durust, magr aisa hai ke har zeerooh ka, chaahe wo insaan hi kyun na ho ye apna zaati masala hai, aur kayi baar maan lene ke baad bhi daryaaft ka amal jaari rehta hai aur har ek nazar ke saath shiddatein badhti, dooni hoti jati hain.

Dher saari duaein aur nek khwahishaat aapke liye... aap apni khoshish jaari rakhein... mujhe yaqeen hai aap apni alag raah nikaalne me zaroor kaamyaab honge... jahan tak rehnumaayee ka sawaal hai to... hum khud ko is laayeq nahin samajhte... bas itna kar lete hain ke agar kuch cheez nazar ko khatak gayi aur saamne wale ne israar kiya, to isharah bhar kar diya. phir wo jane... uska kaam... Aap apni ghazalon ko likhne ke baad kuch din apne saath hi rakhein... aur parhte, gungunate rahein to inka husn aur nikhar sakta hai saath hi... maani ki bhi tehein barhti jayengi.

Meri koshish rehti hai ke kisi lafz ka istemaal us waqt tak na koron jab tak ye yaqeen na aa jaye ke koi doosra lafz us per ghalib nahin aa sakta.

Der se jawaab dene ke liye maafi chahta hon!
Jeete rahiye!

Odu

Aakhir me aik sawaal... jawaab mujhe nahin chahiye... ye sirf yunhi poochne ke liye hai. Aapki is ghazal ke radayef "cheek uthti hain" achi hai... magr kya aap iske maani ki gunjaish se poori tarah waqif hain aur kya kaafiye ke saath iski humaahangi se waqayee satisfied hain?
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wahhhhh buhat hi umda.....keep writing
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wah khoobsurat khush rahiye

buhat buhat shukriya............ ........pasnad karnay ka......
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Salaam!

Bhai musafir... kya baat hai... aapka andaaz to ghazab lagta hai.... kya zabaan hai... kya lafz chunte hain aap... jee khush ho gaya aapki tehreer
ko parh kar... aapne bataya ke aapki maadri zabaan punjabi hai aur iske bawajood aap jis tarah se urdu ko barat rahe hain... kamaal hai! Janab aisa hai ke hum aap ki baaton se pori tarah ittefaaq karte hain aur bas itna kehna chahte hain ke... aap jis safar pe poore josh ke saath gaamzan hain, hum bhi usi safar pe nikle huye hain aur maze ki baat to ye hai ke jangalon aur maidaanon me der se bhatak rahe hain, khushi hoti hai! Lijiye do sher yaad aa gaye... sun lijiye... nida faazli kehte hain

apni talaash apni nazar, apna tajraba
ho chahe rasta saaf bhatak jana chahiye

aur.... aapke ahmad mushtaq sahab..

naye deewano ko dekhein to khushi hoti hai
hum bhi aise hi the jab aaye the veerane me!

sach much khushi ho rahi hai aapse yun ru ba ru hote huye... aur sach kahon to aap hume koi naye deewane to kisi tarah nahin dikhlayee dete... aapka kehna ke jab maan liya to phir kisi aur baat ke liye jageh kahan reh jaati... bilkul durust, magr aisa hai ke har zeerooh ka, chaahe wo insaan hi kyun na ho ye apna zaati masala hai, aur kayi baar maan lene ke baad bhi daryaaft ka amal jaari rehta hai aur har ek nazar ke saath shiddatein badhti, dooni hoti jati hain.

Dher saari duaein aur nek khwahishaat aapke liye... aap apni khoshish jaari rakhein... mujhe yaqeen hai aap apni alag raah nikaalne me zaroor kaamyaab honge... jahan tak rehnumaayee ka sawaal hai to... hum khud ko is laayeq nahin samajhte... bas itna kar lete hain ke agar kuch cheez nazar ko khatak gayi aur saamne wale ne israar kiya, to isharah bhar kar diya. phir wo jane... uska kaam... Aap apni ghazalon ko likhne ke baad kuch din apne saath hi rakhein... aur parhte, gungunate rahein to inka husn aur nikhar sakta hai saath hi... maani ki bhi tehein barhti jayengi.

Meri koshish rehti hai ke kisi lafz ka istemaal us waqt tak na koron jab tak ye yaqeen na aa jaye ke koi doosra lafz us per ghalib nahin aa sakta.

Der se jawaab dene ke liye maafi chahta hon!
Jeete rahiye!

Odu

Aakhir me aik sawaal... jawaab mujhe nahin chahiye... ye sirf yunhi poochne ke liye hai. Aapki is ghazal ke radayef "cheek uthti hain" achi hai... magr kya aap iske maani ki gunjaish se poori tarah waqif hain aur kya kaafiye ke saath iski humaahangi se waqayee satisfied hain?
Adaab Brother-e-mann,

Qibla minnat kash-e-baar-e-mamnooniyat say adab kay raaston ka yeh kotaah qaamat is lamhay faqat itna soch raha hay kay kitna kushaada zarf hay aap ka jis main naa sirf rahnumaai kaa saaman hay balkay, himat afzaai, aur veeran khaan-e-takhayul kay liye kitnay charaag chupay hain jo shab haaey teera main misl-e-khursheed yaas shiknee main hama waqt masroof hain, aap say baat kar kay jo aalam hay main aisaa qavee to kabhi na thaa, bas yeh aap ki hosla afzaai hay kay main mazeed likhnay ki jasaarat kar sakoon gaa, aap kay astafsaar par mahaz itna keh paaon gaa kay cheekhon ko main bhi intehaaey khalaish-e-karb-o-soz-e-ranj-e-wahshat ki nawaa nahin jaanta, magar kiyaa karoon kay abhi naa tajurba kaari bhi to daaman geer hay aur hosla bhi asmaanon tak ka nahin hay, bas jhanjhornay ki bajaaey sirf ishaara karnay par iktefaa kar kay guzar giya, apnay aik aur namoona-e-kalaam ka likn aap ki khidmat main basad ehtraam bhaijnay ki juraat karnay ko dil chaah raha hay us par apnay harf-o-maani ki qandeelain rawana karain jin say main roshni paa kar mazeed acha likh sakoon, aap salamat rahain, sada khush rahain, aur sada muskrahtein ap kay labon par hatmi naaz ban kar raqsaaN rahaiN.

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Ustaad-e-Mohtram,


New ghazal kab charhaa rahey hain site par, janab aap Pak say kiya gaey hain, lagta hay aap ka takhleeqi safar bhi slow ho giya hay, jaldi say wapas aaien, yaa phir wahin say he koi new ghazal upload kar den.


aap ka tabeadaar shaagird.
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Salamz ustaad jee,


Qibla ik jasaarat ki raat ko, agar aap bura naa maanein to bata hoon, ,,,,,,,, wesay aap ki shafqat say umeed hay kay aap dar guzar farma den gay, ,,,,,,,,,, raat ko aap ki is ghazal main thori pevand kaari ki yaa youn kahiye kuch shaagird gardi karnay ki koshish ki, aur main nay daikha kay agar is kay qaafiye main "cheekh uthti hain" ki bajaaey "bain karti hain" bhi laga diya jaaye to wazan to wohi rahey ga magar is ki shiddat-e-izhaar main mazeed kaat paida ho jaaey gi, yeh to mujhey pata nahin kay aap nay isey kuch narm alfaaz main wohi paigham pohenchaaney ki koshish ki ho gi, magar is tarah karney say meray khiyaal main shaairana ta'aali kay murtakib honey say daman bachaya ja sakta hay, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, gustaakhi ki maafi, is ziman main aap kay khiyaalaat jaan'nay kay liyey betaab hoon, umed hay kay aaj after noon main aap kay saath jo nashist hay chaupal main us main aap is maamley main koi pur maghaz guftagu farmaaein gay, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wesay sachi baat bataaoon, yeh shararat sirf is liye ki kay mulaqat main pursish-e-ahwaal kay baad baat karney kay liyey kuch to ho, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


Jeetay rahiye, Allah aap ko aur izat say nawazey, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


shaagird jee
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