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**do-or-die** · #61 04-29-2006, 01:34 AM

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Originally Posted by T@nHa muS@F!r

Do-or-Die, Salam,

Oh sajan jee, its ur id or an order, yaara jo hukam ham sar taa paa mujasma-e-ijz-o-niyaaz banay ap kay is hukm ki ta'ameel kay liye mojood hain, janab bas isi mohabat,isi inayat kaa izhaar kar diya kijiye, ap kay liye, roman to kia, latin main bhi likhi jaa sakti hai, jeetay rahiye, khush rahiye, hanstay muskratay rahiye.............

Sadaa maflooj hay kab say, duain cheekh uthti hain
lutee ismat kay laashay par, hayaaein cheekh uthtee hain

Hisaar-e-zulm say jab bay basee kay bain uthtay hain
Takhayul tharthraata hay, khataaein cheekh uthtee hain
Meray sultaaN teri chokhat pay faryaadain mujassam hain
Yeh ghaao kitnay gehray hain, dawaaein cheekh uthtee hain

KahaaN, insaaniyat, tehzeeb aur insaaf kay daaei
Mushi'yat bay bharam, wahshat saraaein cheekh uthtee hain

Addam say kheech kar layaa thaa jis ko kun kaa aawaazaa
Yeh doraaN larkhraati hay, Fanaaein cheekh uthtee hain

Amman kay ghalghalay main harf masloob-e-muaani hay
Sisaktee hay jo dharkan to, ghinaaein cheekh uthtee hain

Yahi behtar thaa, beti paidaa hotey dafan kar daitay
Koi majboor kehtaa hay to maaein cheekh uthtee hain

Falak ki bay hisee hay laal aandhee ab nahin aatee
Shafaq jab surkh hoti hay, hawaaein cheekh uthtee hain

Khandar yeh girnay waalay hain, nishaan yeh mitnay walay hain
Koi katbooN ko parhtaa hay, ghupaaein cheekh uthtee hain

Jahaan qaanoon andhaa, zar ki laathi thaam chaltaa ho
Wahaan jo adl hotaa hay, sazaaein cheekh tuthee hain

Musafir bujh chukay aatish fishaan ghairat kay seenay main
Yeh dhartee baanjh banjar hay, wafaaein cheekh uthtee hain......

ap ki duaaon ka talib............... ....

~muS@F!r~

vry vry vry niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. ..............
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thanko sooooooooooooooooooo oo much jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eee for writing in roman urdu...for ur nalaiiq behan....

buhat buhat khush rahiyee...
peace @};-
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**Rose4U!** · #62 04-29-2006, 05:18 AM

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Originally Posted by T@nHa muS@F!r

jumla adab dost sathion ki khidmat main ~muS@F!r~ ki taraf se
taza tareen kawish jo k aj ikhtataam pazeer hovi hain or ap sab ki khidmat main paish karnein ki jasarat kar raha hoon, umeed-e-wasiq hai k ap k zoq-e-saleem ki meraaj ko choo paein gi..........

agar koi ghalti reh gai ho to us se sarf-e-nazar kariya ga........

or ap sab ki tanqed-o-araa ka muntazir raho................

jeetay rahaein, khush rahaein, sada hastay muskuratay rahaein.....

ap sab ki duaaoan ka tilib...........

~muS@F!r~

*salaam musafir ji*

very nice work hamesha ashey

hi share kartey raho ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

***Mast Qalandar*** · #63 04-29-2006, 08:43 AM

waaaaaaaaaaah, bahut hi umdaah bahut hi alaa janaab, i like it

Altaf Hussain Malik · #64 05-02-2006, 01:51 PM

Salam Ustaad jee,

Janab aap to baray kaam kay banday hain, aap ko to izhaar ki un girhon par bhi aboor hay jo mahaz ustaadon kaa hi khaasaa hay, jeetay rahiye, Allah aap ko aur ziyaadaa ilm aur quwat-e-tehreer ataa karay.

bohat he aalaa kaavish hay, aap nay apnay shaagird kaa sar fakhar say buland kar diya,

bohat see duaain, bohat sa adaab-o-ehtraam apnay ustaad jee kay liyey,

musafir

**T@nHa muS@F!r** · #65 05-04-2006, 04:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Withoutsoul

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... .......
BOHT KHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB... ......... :clapping: :clapping2

BUHAT BUHAT SHUKRIYA............ .........

**T@nHa muS@F!r** · #66 05-05-2006, 03:14 PM

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Originally Posted by $@GH@R

AOA BOHAT KHOOB DEAR .................... ........

buhat buhat shukriya bhai.............

**T@nHa muS@F!r** · #67 05-05-2006, 03:25 PM

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Originally Posted by tauseef_khan

very nice....
thanx for sharing
@};-

bohat bohay shukriya .................

**T@nHa muS@F!r** · #68 05-05-2006, 03:30 PM

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Originally Posted by aim_am

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bohat acha likha hai pra jee....

bohat bohat shukriya............ .pain jee.........

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