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wah bhai wah, kia musshkil magar pur maghz tehrir hai......
parhtay rahen aur parhtay rahen...
wel done bhai sahib

Salam jee,

mujhay mehsoos hua kay ap nay jab id register karwaya to shaayed sab say top par meri hi ghazal thi, or ap nay pehla msg bhi mujhay hi kiya, agar yeh
mahaz khush gumaani nahin to main apnay ap ko khush qismat tasawar karta
hoon kay aik achay or baazoq qaari nay meri tehreer ko is qaabil samjha,

jeetay rahiye, khush rahiye, hanstay muskraatay rahiye, or meri tehreeron
par apni raaey zaroor paish kiya keejiye,




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apka islaahi andaz'e tehreeer bohot khoob laga... khoobsoorat ashaar ... lafzon ka chunao bhi be'had pur'asar... ho zor'e qalam aur ziada...ameen

bohot acha likha...likhte rahein younhi..@};-

Salam jee,

ap ki id daikh kar apnay aik dost shaair kaa sher yaad aa giya, paish karnay
ki jasarat kar raha hoon,

Chaand ko daikha to woh naaraaz si kehnay lagi,
ya mujhay daikha karo, yaa aainaa daikha karo,


bohat acha laga ap nay meri ghazal ko daad kay qaabil samjhaa, jee, mustaqil
mizaaji to ho gi, dil kay karb nay bhi to mustaqil deray daalay huey hain,
dil kay saath jab dard bhi jaaey gaa to phir sakoon, saari mustaqil mizaaji
kaafoor ho jaaey gi, baharhaal, jee, inshallah apnay qaare'een ko aainda bhi
apnay bay rabt tehreeron say tang karta rahoon gaa,

jeeti rahiye, khush rahiye, hansti muskrati rahiye,






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Very Impressive.....

Bohot khoob....aur great...

Continuity in action....her aik ke bus ki baat nahin....Meyaar ko burqaraar rukhna ...bohot ehem aur mustaqil mizaaji maangta hai....Insha Allah...aap aur bhi Ba-kamaal shair bunain ge....

I am quite hopefull.....Allah hafiz.

Salam muhtram,


ap kay alfaaz mann ki piyaasi dharti par aab-e-zulaal ban kar barsay, chand
gharion ko youn laga jaisay har taraf ik ajeeb si tamaaniat kay deray hain,
janab ap jaisay mukhlis doston nay isi tarah hosla afzai jaari rakhi to ,
yaqeenan meyaar par bhi aanch nahin aayey gi or asraar-e-barbaadi-e-dil bhi
nihaan reh paain gay, inshallah saee-e-baleegh ho gi kay ap ko acha kalaam
parhnay ko milay,

jeetay rahiye, bohat khush rahiye, hansntay muskratay rahiye.











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Asalam o Alikumboht khoob bahi Ap ki her nazam boht hasas or dilkash hoti ha Ap nay boht talakh magar aik sachai ko bayan kia ha boht achay andaz may.Allah Apko hamesha is tarah achi batien likhnay or unhien philanay or amal karnay ki himat Daykush rahiyen.

Salam, yeh zindagi,


Agar ap isay jasaarat tasawar naa karain to aik sher yaad aaya,

Zindagee keh diya hay us nay mujhay,
kia usay mujh pay aitebaar nahin,


janab ap nay jin achay alfaaz kaa nazraana kiya hay, dil ki gehraaion say
bas ik dua si nikalti hay, qabooliat kaa naa to faraib kabhi khaya hay naa he
aarzoo hay magar achay doston kay liyey zaroor yeh khalish si rehti hay kay
ALLAH un ko har khushi jo aalam-e-imkaan main is khaaki jasad rakhnay wali
makhlooq kay liyey bani hay, woh ap sab ko milay, ap ki aaraa ka aainda bhi
intezaar raha karay gay,

jeetay rahain, bohat khush rahain, sada hanstay muskratay rahain.










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wahhhhhhh bohat hi khoob bhai

buhat buhat shukriya............ .......

khsuh rahiye...........
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Bohut Hii Ummdah Bohut Hii Khoobsorat Ghazal
Jaalib Marhoom Yaad Aa Gaeyey
Bohut Sii Daad Qabool Karoo Bhaii
Khush Rahoo Sadda

Salam sagar jee,

janab ap kiya ghazab kartay hain, kahaan janab Habib Jalib or kahan yeh
khaak nasheen, abhi to is dasht main qadam hi rakha hay, abhi to khud he apni tehreeron say mutma'in honay ko dil nahin karta, ap nay to meri basaat say ziyaadaa izat afzaai kar di, baharhaal jis ka zarf jitna kushaadaa hota hay
woh utna he nawaazta hay, ap ki is farakh dili par mahaz itna kahoon gaa kay
main koshish karoon gaa kay achay say acha kalam paish kar sakoon,

jeetay rahiye, boht khush rahiye, hanstay muskratay rahiye.












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Originally Posted by Qismat Ka Sataya


Mere mohteram bhai yeh taalib-e.illm aapkii ghazal kii taareef kiss muuNh se keray ... AlfaaZ ka chunao aur unkii bandaiSh laa.jawaab hai :clap6

Bohot gehrii aur khoobsurat ghazal kahii hai aap ne ... Her sher apni jagah bhaarii hai ... Kisii aik ko haaSil-e.Ghazal muntaKhib kernaa khaasaa muShkil lag raha hai ... All in all, very well written

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Qasim bhai, Salam (110)

Janab bas ham to is qaabil nahin thay, yeh to ap jaisay shukhan shanas,
shukhan parwar, shukhan feham, saahibaan-e-ilm-o-maarefat kay qadmon mian baith kar kasb-e-ilm ki koshish ki to jitna mila us par saad kiya, or phir
"Qul Rab-e-zidni ilmaa" yaad aayaa to tishnagi or barhti gaee, is main koi
zaati kamaal nahin, yeh khaaksaar bas op jaisay doston ki duaaon ko
sarmaaya-e-zeest samajhtaa hay, bas op duaaon or hosla afzaai ki rasm jaari
rakhiye gaa,

jeetay rahiye, khush rahiye, hanstay muskratay rahiye,

or us dar par jhukay rahiye jahan bay zar boozar ban jaatay hain, or hamaray liyey bhi kuch maangiye,







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Salam praa ji,

janab ap kay achay alfaaz ka dil ke gehraaion say mamnoon hoon, waisy shayed kuch tehreerain aisi hotee hain jo ko likhtay huey likhnay wala bhi ro parta ho, mumkin hay yeh bhi aisi hi tehreer ho, ap nay aasaani say keh diya kay aisa hi likhtay rahiye, chaliyey hazoor ap ki khaatir yeh bhi kar lain gay,
ab bhaaion ko naaraz karna to mumkin nahin , pehlay he zindagee naraaz hue
hay ham say, ap jeetay rahain, bohat khush rahain, hanstay muskratay rahain, or apni raaey kaa izhaar kartay rahain, or haan, main likhtaa rahoon gaa, shaayed is tarah kuch talkhi kam hoti rahay, or main or jee paaon




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