It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
It seems that you are unregistered. Please register with us by clicking Here, or if you are already registered login here
Welcome to Urdu Community & Poetry/Shayari Forum
This is a discussion on dost meray ye duniya hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; girgiet ki taragh rang badlay dost meray ye duniya hai zakhmoun per namak cherkay dost meray ye duniya hai churtay ...
| |||||||
| Poetry | Video | Photo | Books | Games | Sites | Register | Groups | FAQ | Calendar | Mark Forums Read | Chat |
| Notices | |||||||||||
|
 |
| | LinkBack | Thread Tools |
|
#1
06-14-2007, 06:29 PM
| |||||
| |||||
girgiet ki taragh rang badlay dost meray ye duniya hai zakhmoun per namak cherkay dost meray ye duniya hai churtay suraj ko pujay dost meray ye duniya hai waqat peray to ankhien pehray dost meray ye duniya hai mun pe ram baghal mein churie dost meray ye duniya hai aslie kia aur naklie kai hai dost meray ye duniya hai pal mein tola pal mein masha dost meray ye duniya hai saachi hai ya johuti hai dost meray ye duniya hai na tarie hai na marie hai dost meray ye duniya hai Yasmin Yasi         |
|
#2
06-14-2007, 07:24 PM
| |||||
| |||||
achha likha aap ne Yasmin saaheba,duniya ki sahee akaasi ki hai aap ne,duniya issi ka naam hai,  aek baat aor arz karta chaloon ke POET CLUB main aap aek din main sirf aek hi thread shuru kar saktey hain,aek se ziyaada thread ki soorat main tamaam threads ko merge kar diya jaata hai,aor is ka maqsad yeh hai ke tamaam members ko aek jesa maoqa mil sakey,aor parney waaley us ko na sirf parain,balke us par reply bhi de sakain,umeed hai aap baat samajh rahi hongi,aor aainda aetiyaat karain gi, 1.gif ")1") bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
__________________  |
|
#3
06-14-2007, 08:09 PM
| |||||
| |||||
 Aap Ki Likhi Yeh Kaawish Bhi Mujhay Pasand Aai...Khayaal Umdagi Say Paish Kiya Hay...Daad Qubool Kijiye...Likhna Owr Share Karna Jaari Rakhiye...
__________________ |
|
#4
06-15-2007, 06:42 AM
| |||||
| |||||
"dost mery ye duniya hy".... moashry ki khrabioN ko ayaN krti ye nazm achi lagi... thoughts bohat achy haiN... acha laga paRh kr,,, aur aik din meiN aik hi thread wali bat kr zehn meiN rakhiay ga , taa'kay baqi members ki creations ko bhi first page pr rehny ka aur maximum members ki raa'ay jan'ny ka ziada waqt mil saky....aap acha likhti haiN, keep it up.... wish u all the best...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
|
#5
06-15-2007, 07:23 AM
| |||||
| |||||
nice bohat achhi kosish ki hai app nay thora sa lafzoo ko banoo singar ka moqa miltat to bohat umda ho jatti apki ghzal... app meri janab se bohat daad qabool karyee
__________________   |
|
#6
06-16-2007, 03:38 AM
| |||||
| |||||
Hi. daad ka shukaria aik se ziyada post kernay per maazarat abhi new houn is liea agay se asi galtie neigh ho gi dua k saath Yasmin Yasi |
|
#7
06-16-2007, 03:36 PM
| |||||
| |||||
wahhhhh...ji acha likha aap ne...likhti rhiye...khush rahiye....
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
|
#8
06-18-2007, 12:14 PM
| |||||
| |||||
bohat khub
__________________  |
|
| Bookmarks |
| Tags |
| dost, meray, duniya |
| Thread Tools | |
| |
Similar Threads | ||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| 142 Jokes | TariqRaheel | Jokes n Jokes | 7 | 03-16-2008 12:00 AM |
| ~!! Meray Be-Waffa mUGhey bhOol Jaa !!~ | ~ HijR ~ | Nazam | 11 | 10-14-2007 09:05 AM |
| Meray Dil Ki Raakh Tu Kuraid Mat...!!! | *~*sMiLiNg DoLL*~* | Ashaar - Misc | 11 | 10-07-2007 02:22 AM |
| haathoun ko meray thaam ke............. | yasmin ahmad | Urdu Poet Club | 6 | 06-18-2007 12:12 PM |
| dost meray ye duniya hai | yasmin ahmad | Dost | 2 | 06-14-2007 06:16 PM |
dost meray ye duniya hai 
