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This is a discussion on in dino'n aks pareshan nahi hota hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; apni eak gazal ke saath hazir hoon , apni qeemti aa_raa se nawazein , muntazir hoon dilshadnazmi...
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| apni eak gazal ke saath hazir hoon , apni qeemti aa_raa se nawazein , muntazir hoon dilshadnazmi |
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#2
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| As-salam-o-alaikum Dilshad nazmi sahab, aap ne bohat hi taweel arse bad kuch share kiya hy, kahaN ghaib thy itny dinoN se... ye ghazal bhi khoob rahi, pehly misry ne hi itna lutf diya k kafi der isi ko dohrata rha... "in dinoN aks pryshan nahiN hota hy..." baei wahh... youN to tamaam ashaar hi khoob kahy hain aap ne, so merri janib se bohat si daad is qadar achi ghazal kehny pr qubool kreN... ager na-gawar na guzry to sirf aik do bateN arz krny i jasarat kruN ga... aur ye meri zati ra'ay ho gi, kisi aur ka is se ittifaq krna lazim nahiN... ghazal k tersry sheir hy: "sheikh meiN aap sa huliya to bna luN, lekin, dil hi kambakht musalman nahiN hota hy..." pehly misry meiN lafz "sheikh" tanha maza nahiN de raha, yahaN ager sheikh sahab kaha ja'ay to sheir ka lehja lutf de ga, mujhy ye misra aisy paRhny meiN ziada lutf aa rha hy: "sheikh sahib sa meiN huliya to bna luN, lekin, dil hi kambakht musalman nahiN hota hy..." dusri baat ye k aakhri sheir meiN "her din" ki bja'ay "her roz" ziada mozuN mohawra banta hy... umeid hy aap ko meri koi baat garaaN nahiN guzri ho gi, aik bar phir meri janib se is umda ghazal ki nazr bohat si daad, qubool kreN... Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN... aur youNhi ham se acha acha share krty raheN...
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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#3
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| khud ko kam dekhna aasan nahin hota hai wahhhhh......bohat khoob sari ghazal he shandaar hai isi trah likhtya rahin..khush rahin.. ![]() |
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#4
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| ghazal bohat undah hai...........daad kabool kiejea.......khush rahian |
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#5
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| AOA, Dilshaad saheb, app ki ghazal parh kay bara lutf mila, aur Faizan ki isslahat bhee bari dilchasp hein, waqaii ghazal aur khoobsorat ho jaye gee. Raza
__________________ MujhKo Meray Afkaar kay Aainay mein dekho Qirtaas kay Dhabbay meri pehchaan nahi hen Sahir Faizabadi |
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#6
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| kyun pareshan hai dil ghum ki pzeerai mein apnay ghar mein koi mehmaan nahi hota hai fayada tujh ko tera jhoot dila dey leiken mujh ko sach bol ke nuqsan nahi hota hai wahhhhhhh wahh.. janab-e-dilshaad nazmi.. pehli baar aap ko parhnay ka itefaaq hua.. aur jaan ker behad khushi huee.. ke aap HG ke qabil shaora mein eik khush'numa-o-besh'baha izafa hein.. ghazal bohat umdah rahi.. mundarja bala ashaar ke to kya kehnay.. dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. mazeed ka yaqeenan intezar rahay ga.. ab tak ka behad Shukria.. ![]() wafa aur dua ke saath withlove ![]()
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#7
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| Assalam-o-Alaikom Dilshaad sahab kaisay hain ap? kaafi arsa baad apki shairi yahan forum per pari bohut acha laga, MashaAllah bohut shandar ghazal likhi ha apnay, ghazal ki her shair dil ko cho gya ha, her lihaz sey khubsurat aor mukamal ghazal kahi ha apnay, Allah apko humaishah khush rakhay Ameen.
__________________ kaash aisa kamal hojayewo mera hum khayal hojaye ![]() |
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#8
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| bahot khoob Dilshad nazmi saheb,khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne,jissey paR ke bahot lutf aaya,so meri tarf se bhi bahot si daad qabool kijiye, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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