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Bohot Khoob Kanwal Ji..... /good
Achhi Zameen Main Likha Hai..

TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE

bohot achhay

<!--QuoteBegin-Iqra+Aug 5 2003, 09:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Iqra @ Aug 5 2003, 09:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> buhat khoob Kanwal jee ... /weldone

keep it up /flower [/b][/quote]
thanx iqra jeee............ /flower ..

<!--QuoteBegin-tanha_musafir+Aug 5 2003, 08:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tanha_musafir @ Aug 5 2003, 08:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Kanwal Sis!
Kiya kahooN, it is simply outstanding /weldone. Aik aik sher jaisay mottiyun main piroya hua hai. Iss sher kee tu kiya hee baat hai,

<center> TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE </center>

Keep writing n sharing /flowers
Regards,
A@tif [/b][/quote]
thans aatif bhai......... /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-Hashim Raza+Aug 5 2003, 06:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Hashim Raza @ Aug 5 2003, 06:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Bohot Khoob Kanwal Ji..... /good
Achhi Zameen Main Likha Hai..

TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE

bohot achhay [/b][/quote]
thanx hashim bhai............ /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-SAGARKHAN+Aug 5 2003, 05:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (SAGARKHAN @ Aug 5 2003, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-kanwal_81+Aug 5 2003, 05:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal_81 @ Aug 5 2003, 05:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Amjad islam amjad ki aik ghazal he jis ka aakhri shair he…

‘Hua he wo agar munsif ,to amjad ahtiatan ham
Saza tajveez karte hain kisi ilzam se pehle..’’

Ye meri favourite ghazal he isski zameen par meri koshish.parh kar reply zaror karain ke kesi lagi ghazal. /flower

Dilon main dard behta he tumhare nam se pehle
Lahoo main zakhm jalte hain hawa-e-sham se pehle @};-


Tere qadmo-n ki aahat har qadam mehsoos hoti he
Aziyat raqs karti he safar ki sham se pehle @};-

Kahan bichda hua koi safar ke bad milta he
Hamain mil kar hi jana tum safar ki sham se pehle @};-

TUMHARE&nbsp; LAMS&nbsp; NE&nbsp; CHOO&nbsp; KAR&nbsp; TU&nbsp; INKO&nbsp; KAR&nbsp; DIA&nbsp; MOTI
MERI&nbsp; PALKON&nbsp; PE&nbsp; LAGTE&nbsp; THE&nbsp; YE&nbsp; AANSOO&nbsp; AAM&nbsp; SE&nbsp; PEHLE @};-

Tere aane se pehle to ye dil veerana-e-tan tha
Magar ab phool khilte hain tumhar nam se pehle @};-

Teri aankhon ko dekha to faq-qat itna khial aaya
Guzarin kis tarah umrain , salone jam se pehle @};-

Tumhare bad charon simt ik gehri khamoshi he
Ye kesi sham utri he umar ki sham se pehle @};-

Meri palkon ko ab teri unglion ki narm aadat he
Ye aankhain so hi jati thin bohat aaram se pehle @};-

Teri nazron ki khushboo har taraf mehsoos hoti he
KANWAL&nbsp; ke&nbsp; phool&nbsp; khilte&nbsp; hon&nbsp; ke&nbsp; jese&nbsp; sham&nbsp; se&nbsp; pehle @};-

BY: kanwal shahab ahmad. @};-&nbsp; /flower [/b][/quote]
wahhhhhhh kanwal jee bohut ummda,lajawab,,,,,,, ,,,,, @};- /flower @};- [/b][/quote]
thanx sagar bhai................ . /flower

OH KANWAL ITS REALLLY AN EXCELLENT AND OUTSTANDING POEM..
BOHOT KHOOBSOORAT GHAZAL HAY.

TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE @};-

Teri aankhon ko dekha to faq-qat itna khial aaya
Guzarin kis tarah umrain , salone jam se pehle @};-

THESE ARE SUPERB ASHAAR. /flowers

TUMHARE LAMS NE CHOO KAR TU INKO KAR DIA MOTI
MERI PALKON PE LAGTE THE YE AANSOO AAM SE PEHLE

waaah kia kehnay
bohot accha likha hey kanwal tum nay mashallah
/flower

wow very nice


looks like amjadislam amjad 's poetry /flower