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Dil se jab dard gaya, dil bhi gaya, jaaN bhi gayi

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Old 09-27-2007, 01:57 PM
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Dil se jab dard gaya, dil bhi gaya, jaaN bhi gayee
Aur jeenay ki wo ek khwahish-e-nadaaN bhi gayee

Chashm-e-hairaaN maiN sajaa tera sarapaa bhi gaya
Aur tasawwur se teri zulf-e-pareshaaN bhi gayee

Na koi hijr raha aur na koi wasl raha
Shiddat-e-dard gayee, khwahish-e-darmaaN bhi gayee

Gham ke ma'ni rahe baqi na khushi ka mafhoom
Qeemat-e-ehd gai, wuq'at-e-paimaaN bhi gayee

Teri ummeed jo haaray to sabhi haar gaye
Quwwat-e-ishq ke saath azmat-e-insaaN bhi gayee
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very nice ghazal
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Na koi hijr raha aur na koi wasl raha
Shiddat-e-dard gayee, khwahish-e-darmaaN bhi gayee
wahh...bohat dilkash....bohat khush rahin likhtay rahin
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very nice ghazal
Aap ka bohot bohot shukria mohtarma
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Na koi hijr raha aur na koi wasl raha
Shiddat-e-dard gayee, khwahish-e-darmaaN bhi gayee
wahh...bohat dilkash....bohat khush rahin likhtay rahin
Bohot shukria Kanwal, aap hamesha hosla afzai karti hain, ek baar phir shukria
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Old 09-27-2007, 11:04 PM
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khwahish-e-darmaaN bhi gayee

wahhhh... bohat umda khayal hai.. bohat dilkash asha'r kahay aapne...

aakhri shair thori aur tawajja chahta hai...

khush rahiye
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Old 09-28-2007, 05:44 AM
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Excellent post - bohut khoob
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khwahish-e-darmaaN bhi gayee

wahhhh... bohat umda khayal hai.. bohat dilkash asha'r kahay aapne...

aakhri shair thori aur tawajja chahta hai...

khush rahiye
Mehroo Sahiba, ghazal ki pasandeedgi ke liye had darja shukr guzaar hoon...aakhri sher per zaroor tawajju doonga...thanx again
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