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Old 05-29-2006, 07:53 PM
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jumla adab dost sathion ki khidmat main ~muS@F!r~ ki taraf se
ik taza kawish ap sab ki khidmat main paish karnein ki jasarat kar raha hoon, umeed-e-wasiq hai k ap k zoq-e-saleem ki meraaj ko choo paein gi, agar koi ghalti reh gai ho to us se sarf-e-nazar kariya ga, or ap sab ki tanqed-o-araa ka muntazir raho, jeetay rahaein, khush rahaein, sada hastay muskuratay rahaein.

ap sab ki duaaoan ka tilib...........


Dil maiN rakheiN to nigaahoN say juda ho jaaey
Kiya qiyamat hai, jisey chaaheiN, Khuda ho jaaey

ankh khaaboN ko kabhi daam-e-sehar maiN ghairey
Khaab jharr jaaeiN to yeh farsh-e-azaa ho jaaey

Khaak zaadey haiN, tujhey chootey huey dartey haiN
Ham say jannat maiN kahiN phir na khataa ho jaaey

Zabt bhi hota nahiN, toot kay rona bhi nahiN
Rog aisa hai kay jeevan bhi sazaa ho jaaey

Ishq hai, daagh nahiN, noor hai peishaani ka
Sar ho tasleem maiN kham, sajda adaa ho jaaey

Hijr-o-aaseb-e-mohabat ki fasooN kaari maiN
Tum jo taaveez bano, radd-e-balaa ho jaaey

Harf bhi lab pay haiN or haath bhi khaali apney
Woh to kuch or hai jo rakht-e-duaa ho jaaey

Woh bhi manzil kahiN aati hay wafaa ki raah meiN
Khaak-e-na'alein bhi jab khaak-e-shifaa ho jaaey

Ham ko nisbat hay muS@F!r kisi aisay dar say
Ab to a'adaa ko bhi khairaat-e-wafa ho jaaey
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Old 05-30-2006, 12:07 AM
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Ham ko nisbat hay muS@F!r kisi aisay dar say
Ab to a'adaa ko bhi khairaat-e-wafa ho jaaey
Waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah ... Kya khoob kaha hai mere bhai ... Shair paRhker tabiyyat taazaa ho ga'ee ... Bohot khoob :clap5

Aik baat yahaaN per aapko bataanaa bohot zaroorii ... Pooraa yaqeen hai merii baat ka bura naheiN maanaiNgay aap

Shair # 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, aur 9 k qavaafee ghalat ho ga'ay ... Ghabraa'iay naheiN, maiN uskii wajah bhii bataataa hooN

Aap ne matle meN "juda" aur "khuda" qaafiaa baandhaa hai ... Ab choonke malte k dono qaafiay "juda" aur "khuda" daal aur alif per khatam hote haiN iss liay ab aap paaband ho ga'ay haiN k baaqii aShaar k bhii qaafiay daal aur alif per khatam hoN ... Iss tarah dekha jaa'ay to malte k saath shair #5 ka qaafia hee jaa'iZ hai

Iss masle ko duur kerne ka aasaan tareeqa hai ... Apne malte k kisii aik micre ka qaafia tabdeel ker daiN

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wah!!!!!
bahot khoob janaab,kaya khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ne,maza aa gaya par ke,har har sher pe dil ash ash kar uthaa,is qadar khoobsurat ghazal kehne pe dheron daad qabool kijiye,

bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye ke bahot hi khoobsurat likhte hain aap.
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bauhat umda para jee hamesha kee tarhaan

apni is umda kawish per is khaaksaar kee janib say dili mubarakbaad aur bauhat c daad qubool farmaayen

Khush rhain sadda
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Ha ha ha , ,,,,,,,,,, ha ha ha , ,,,,,,,,,,,, ha ha ha , ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ha ha ha, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ha ha ha , ,,,,,,,,,, ustaad jee, maza aa giyaa, main soch raha hooN aap ki kaifeeat kiya ho gi, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ha ha ha ha ha ha , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mujhey matla lay baithaa, aur aap ko qaafiyay nay dabo diya, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,, qasam say is waqat aap kay saamney hota to aap ka muny choom laitaa, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


Qasim Bhai, aap khoob adab ki khidmat kar rahey hain, acha hay koi apna he ghalti nikaal day warna dosray to bohat takabur , bohat zulm aur bohat bay rehmi say ghaltiyaan nikaltey hain, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Allah aap ko jazaa-e-khair day.


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Shaagird jee,
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Qasim Bhai, aap khoob adab ki khidmat kar rahey hain, acha hay koi apna he ghalti nikaal day warna dosray to bohat takabur , bohat zulm aur bohat bay rehmi say ghaltiyaan nikaltey hain, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Allah aap ko jazaa-e-khair day.


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Shaagird jee,
Mere bhai iss ghareeb kee kya haisat k woh adab kii khidmat ker sakay? Mere paas jitna illm hai bas woh aagay baRhaa raha hooN

Ali Ali janaab Ali Ali k naam per >-v

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bohat acha likha hai

gr8 work
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