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Dil maiN rakheiN to nigaahoN say juda ho jaaey

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Old 05-31-2006, 09:42 AM
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@};- bohat khoob musafir bahai
parh ker lutf aya,
jeetay rahiay aur youn he likhtay rahiay @};-
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BEAUTYFULL!!!!

Very nice work!

keep it on!!!!!!!!!
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Originally Posted by Qismat Ka Sataya
Mere bhai iss ghareeb kee kya haisat k woh adab kii khidmat ker sakay? Mere paas jitna illm hai bas woh aagay baRhaa raha hooN

Ali Ali janaab Ali Ali k naam per >-v

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Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Salamz Qassim Bhai,


Janab khud ko ghareeb keh kar hamein gunaahgaar to naa karein naa, ,,,,,,,,,,, ghareeb to woh hota ha jis ka koi dost na ho, ya woh hota hay jis ki izat na ho, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Mola nay aap ko donon say khoob khoob nawaza hay, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, aur ilm to baantney say aur barhtaa hay, ,,,,,,,,,,, Waris-e-ilm aap ko mazeed ilm say nawaazain.

Jeetey rahiye, khush rahiye, hanstey muskratey rahiye.


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bht khoob bhai
jaldi jaldi aur vi likho
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wow bohat achi hai :flower3
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Originally Posted by Qismat Ka Sataya
Waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah ... Kya khoob kaha hai mere bhai ... Shair paRhker tabiyyat taazaa ho ga'ee ... Bohot khoob :clap5

Aik baat yahaaN per aapko bataanaa bohot zaroorii ... Pooraa yaqeen hai merii baat ka bura naheiN maanaiNgay aap

Shair # 2, 3, 4, 6, 7, 8, aur 9 k qavaafee ghalat ho ga'ay ... Ghabraa'iay naheiN, maiN uskii wajah bhii bataataa hooN

Aap ne matle meN "juda" aur "khuda" qaafiaa baandhaa hai ... Ab choonke malte k dono qaafiay "juda" aur "khuda" daal aur alif per khatam hote haiN iss liay ab aap paaband ho ga'ay haiN k baaqii aShaar k bhii qaafiay daal aur alif per khatam hoN ... Iss tarah dekha jaa'ay to malte k saath shair #5 ka qaafia hee jaa'iZ hai

Iss masle ko duur kerne ka aasaan tareeqa hai ... Apne malte k kisii aik micre ka qaafia tabdeel ker daiN

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Brother-e-mohtram, AqeedatoN ki ik jaltrang hay jo aap kay qadmon par nichaar honay ko beqrar hay, main dar asal apni mitti say kuch din kay liye door hua tha, tabeeat aajkal kuch griftaa hay, dil to raha nahin, yaa rakha nahin, ab kiya arooz ki qaid main ghut ghut kay izhaar karna, ab to apna khiyaal nahin rakhtay, arooz ka kiyaa rakhain, aap nay jin lateef aghlaat ki nishaandahi ki woh to aap jaisi meharbaan hasti kay irfaan-e-fehm-o-idraak ki dastras main aanay ki bajaa tor par mutaqaazi thi, main mamnoon hon kay aap kay is qadar daqeeq-o-ameeq nazar say parha, aap kay liye duaaon ki saughaat har lamhay baar aawari kay liye multaji hoti hay, ab kiya hay kay jab tak saansain bahaal nahin hotein yaa band nahin hotein, kiya hay kay kuch azaad rehnay ki hasrat si hay, aap zaroor zaroor apni mohabat ka izhaar kartay rahiye ga, bohat si naik khaahishaat kay saath, aap ka nadaan sa bhai.........







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buhat khub
kush raho bhai Ameen
buhat buhat shukriya............ ..
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Quote:
Originally Posted by zain
wah!!!!!
bahot khoob janaab,kaya khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ne,maza aa gaya par ke,har har sher pe dil ash ash kar uthaa,is qadar khoobsurat ghazal kehne pe dheron daad qabool kijiye,

bahot khush rahiye,aor likhte rahiye ke bahot hi khoobsurat likhte hain aap.

Zain bhai, aap bohat khush raho, jeetay raho, Allah karay kai mai kuch aisa likh paaon k bhaion kay dil ko sakoon milay, arsh-e-izhaar par ik muddat say siyaah bakhti ka garehan laga hay, ye chat jaaey to shaayed is say bhi acha paish kar sakoon, is izat afzaai par, is mohabat or is izhaar-e-haroof-e-tahseen par buhat bohat shukar guzaar hoon, Allah pak ap ko zamanay kay har sard-o-garm say bachaaey.........


ap ki duaaon ka talib............









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