Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Sep 6 2003, 04:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Sep 6 2003, 04:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 5 2003, 06:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 5 2003, 06:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> salam


x x upto the standerdsx @};- bohoot achi lagi ghazal app ki

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai


x&nbsp; waqaii pichli ghazal ki kaser nikal di app nay thanx for sharing


tahir [/b][/quote]
haan to tahir ab batao kesi lagi yeh gazal mein ney kosish ki thi key pichli gazal ka azala ho jaye aap ko pasand aai mughe behaad khushi hoi aindha bhi reply ki muntazir rahoon gi akhir aap ki hosla afzai hi mere likhne ka sabab hai
take care
khush rahain [/b][/quote]
salam

ji ji waqaii main nay kaha na k u have done the work , bohoot acha likha or motivate to kerna hi cahhiyay acha likhnayw alay ko likhti rahain we are here to read u


keep sharing

tahir [/b][/quote]
again thanx tahir @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

dil ko tumhari yaad sey azad kiya hai
khod ko kabhi aise bhi to barbaad kiya hai

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai

tugh sey teri wafaoon ki kharaat mang kar
khud aap apni chah ko faryaad kiya hai

aye dost tu ney tark e taluq key wastey
kesa yeh sitam ikk naya ajaad kiya hai

ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai [/b][/quote]
BOHAT HI UMDA AUR RAWAN GHZAL HE DEAR SAROSH.. /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 6 2003, 01:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 6 2003, 01:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai



Very nice ghazal sarosh sis&nbsp;

Doodh ka jala chajh bhi phoonk phoonk ker peta hai ........bari mashoor kahawat hai ...may be related to this shair . [/b][/quote]
thanx fari dear gazal pasand karne ka izhaad sukriya @};- [/b][/quote]
Pasand kerna to baekhtiyari hai ....U can say tareef ka shukriya ..
per no need of that either

U r welcom /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal+Sep 6 2003, 06:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal @ Sep 6 2003, 06:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

dil ko tumhari yaad sey azad kiya hai
khod ko kabhi aise bhi to barbaad kiya hai

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai

tugh sey teri wafaoon ki kharaat mang kar
khud aap apni chah ko faryaad kiya hai

aye dost tu ney tark e taluq key wastey
kesa yeh sitam ikk naya ajaad kiya hai

ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai [/b][/quote]
BOHAT HI UMDA AUR RAWAN GHZAL HE DEAR SAROSH.. /flower [/b][/quote]
thanx kanwal dear @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 6 2003, 06:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 6 2003, 06:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 6 2003, 01:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 6 2003, 01:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai



Very nice ghazal sarosh sisx&nbsp;

Doodh ka jala chajh bhi phoonk phoonk ker peta hai ........bari mashoor kahawat hai ...may be related to this shair . [/b][/quote]
thanx fari dear gazal pasand karne ka izhaad sukriya @};- [/b][/quote]
Pasand kerna to baekhtiyari hai ....U can say tareef ka shukriya ..
per no need of that either

U r welcom /flower [/b][/quote]
so nice of u fari dear @};-