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<!--QuoteBegin-ghurob-e-aftab+Sep 5 2003, 02:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (ghurob-e-aftab @ Sep 5 2003, 02:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> sarosh khan Nice [/b][/quote]
thanx gazal pasand karne ka behaad sukriya @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-BEWAFA+Sep 5 2003, 03:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BEWAFA @ Sep 5 2003, 03:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> wahh saroash kamal ker dia v niceee bahut zaberdast gazal likhi hey
keep writinggg @};- [/b][/quote]
thanx bewafa jee meri post pasand karnbe ka behaad sukriya @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Soft voice+Sep 5 2003, 04:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Soft voice @ Sep 5 2003, 04:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 5 2003, 11:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

dil ko tumhari yaad sey azad kiya hai
khod ko kabhi aise bhi to barbaad kiya hai

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai

tugh sey teri wafaoon ki kharaat mang kar
khud aap apni chah ko faryaad kiya hai

aye dost tu ney tark e taluq key wastey
kesa yeh sitam ikk naya ajaad kiya hai

ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai [/b][/quote]
Salaam Sarosh!

V nice ,khubsurat Ghazal hai
U wrote very well

Take care n Allah haafiz

Soft voice /piano [/b][/quote]
thanx dear for ur reply @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> salam


upto the standerds @};- bohoot achi lagi ghazal app ki

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai


waqaii pichli ghazal ki kaser nikal di app nay thanx for sharing


tahir [/b][/quote]
haan to tahir ab batao kesi lagi yeh gazal mein ney kosish ki thi key pichli gazal ka azala ho jaye aap ko pasand aai mughe behaad khushi hoi aindha bhi reply ki muntazir rahoon gi akhir aap ki hosla afzai hi mere likhne ka sabab hai
take care
khush rahain

ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai



Very nice ghazal sarosh sis

Doodh ka jala chajh bhi phoonk phoonk ker peta hai ........bari mashoor kahawat hai ...may be related to this shair .

<!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 5 2003, 10:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ab dil to mohabbat sey hi ghabrane laga hai
kuch aisa teri chah ney nashaad kiya hai



Very nice ghazal sarosh sis

Doodh ka jala chajh bhi phoonk phoonk ker peta hai ........bari mashoor kahawat hai ...may be related to this shair . [/b][/quote]
thanx fari dear gazal pasand karne ka izhaad sukriya @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Innocent Devil+Sep 6 2003, 01:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Innocent Devil @ Sep 6 2003, 01:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

bohat acccchi likhi hai .. /tali [/b][/quote]
thanx for ur reply and for liking my gazal @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 5 2003, 06:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 5 2003, 06:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Sep 5 2003, 04:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> salam


&nbsp; &nbsp; upto the standerds&nbsp; @};- bohoot achi lagi ghazal app ki

kuch soch key jis pal tera dil zor sey dharkey
yeh jan lena hum ney tughe yaad kiya hai

yadoon mein teri raat gaye deep jala kar
akser shab e tanhai ko abaad kiya hai


&nbsp; waqaii pichli ghazal ki kaser nikal di app nay thanx for sharing


tahir [/b][/quote]
haan to tahir ab batao kesi lagi yeh gazal mein ney kosish ki thi key pichli gazal ka azala ho jaye aap ko pasand aai mughe behaad khushi hoi aindha bhi reply ki muntazir rahoon gi akhir aap ki hosla afzai hi mere likhne ka sabab hai
take care
khush rahain [/b][/quote]
salam

ji ji waqaii main nay kaha na k u have done the work , bohoot acha likha or motivate to kerna hi cahhiyay acha likhnayw alay ko likhti rahain we are here to read u


keep sharing

tahir