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Dil Ki Rag Rag Mai'n Utarta Huwa Nashter Dekhu'n

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wahhhhhhhhhhhh janab pehli martaba aap ki shaairi paRhnay ka ittefaaq hua hay buhut zabardast buhut si daad hamari taraf say
Khushi Hui Kay Aap Nay Maira Likha Bhi Read Kiya Aur Aap Ko Pasand Bhi Aaya...Mairi Taraf Say Howsla Afzaai Kay Liye Qubool Kijiye...
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very nice haya bohat achi ghazal kahi aap nay its realy good
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Khushi Hui Kay Ghazal Aap Ko Achi Lagi...
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Bohat Umdaah Kalam hai aap ka Haya

Aur itni kasr e nafsi bhee achi nahin,

Ghalib tu keh gaee haiN

HaiN aur bhee duniya main sukhan war bht achay
Kehtay haiN k Ghalib ka hai andaaz e biyaan aur

Khush rehiya

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Bohat Umdaah Kalam hai aap ka Haya

Aur itni kasr e nafsi bhee achi nahin,

Ghalib tu keh gaee haiN

HaiN aur bhee duniya main sukhan war bht achay
Kehtay haiN k Ghalib ka hai andaaz e biyaan aur

Khush rehiya

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daagh seene mein numayaan hon k ashk aankhon mein,,
mujhko is se hai gharz ghar ko munawar dekhoon..

log kehte hain sukoon milta hai weerane mein,,
chalo basti se zara door nikal ker dekhoon..

mein hoon haya aur shairi miri kia hai,,
aik se aik zamane mein sukhanwar dekhoon..


sab se pheleyyyyyy sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyy
k main late aya hoonnnn. asl main mai kucdh kafi dinoo badh ah raha hooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

gazal k baray main kuch nahi kahoon ga kion k her bari ki trah ap kehney ko kuch chorti hi nahain. aur takeetah tuu mujhey bhi nahi ati iss liya main bhi ap ki trah takhati shahab ko samjhney ki kosish ker raha hoon lakin mujhey nahi lagta kuch kam baney chaloo kosish jarey rakhtey hain kuch na kuch tuu ah hi jayee ga.

aur meri traf se bohat se dadh qabool keroo itni payari gazal kehney per.

ALLAH tumhain sada kush rakhey. ALALH tumhain dhairoon kushiyan attah kerey. ALLAH tumhain her medan main kamyaab kerey. Ameen Sum Ameen
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daagh seene mein numayaan hon k ashk aankhon mein,,
mujhko is se hai gharz ghar ko munawar dekhoon..

log kehte hain sukoon milta hai weerane mein,,
chalo basti se zara door nikal ker dekhoon..

mein hoon haya aur shairi miri kia hai,,
aik se aik zamane mein sukhanwar dekhoon..

sab se pheleyyyyyy sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyy
k main late aya hoonnnn. asl main mai kucdh kafi dinoo badh ah raha hooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

gazal k baray main kuch nahi kahoon ga kion k her bari ki trah ap kehney ko kuch chorti hi nahain. aur takeetah tuu mujhey bhi nahi ati iss liya main bhi ap ki trah takhati shahab ko samjhney ki kosish ker raha hoon lakin mujhey nahi lagta kuch kam baney chaloo kosish jarey rakhtey hain kuch na kuch tuu ah hi jayee ga.

aur meri traf se bohat se dadh qabool keroo itni payari gazal kehney per.

ALLAH tumhain sada kush rakhey. ALALH tumhain dhairoon kushiyan attah kerey. ALLAH tumhain her medan main kamyaab kerey. Ameen Sum Ameen
Aap Nay Itna Saraha Hay Kay Ab Mai'n Kiya Reply Likhoo'n?

Aap Nay Itna Busy Hotay Huway Bhi Maira Likha Read Bhi Kiya Aur Itna Umda Reply Bhi Likha...Us Par Say Sorry Bhi Kar Rahay Hai'n
Aap Nay Hamesha Hi Mairi Bouhat Howsla Afzaai Ki Hay...Is Martaba Bhi Aap Nay Maira Likha Pasand Bhi Kiya Aur Howsla Afzaai Bhi Ki...Jis Kay Liye Mai'n Bouhat Shukar Guzaar Hoo'n...Aap Ki Itni Dhair Saari Duao'n Ka /shukriya...Jazaak Allah ....Bouhat Khush Rahiye...Aameen
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