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Dil Ki Rag Rag Mai'n Utarta Huwa Nashter Dekhu'n

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wah... ye ghazal bhi achi rahi...

maqte meN inkisati ko acha portraykiya kiya hy
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Asslamo alikum lijye haya karachi se lot anay k bad se musataqil aap ko
bohut mohabbat k sath commnts de rahi hoon is gahazl k baray
main sirf itna hi kehna baaki hoga k poet club main jitna achha likhene
walay hain unn main sare fehrest hain aap bhi hain aaj kal aap ka likha
hia mujhe sab se ziyda bha raha hai ALLAh aap k kalam o zehan ko
aur taqat ata farmaaye Ameen(*)
Walaikum Assalam... Aap Ko Main Kiya Reply Likhoo'n? Aap Nay To Itna Saraha Hay Kay Mai'n Heran Hi Reh Gai...Sach To Yeh Hay Kay Mujhay Aap Sab Kay Replies Say Likhnay Main Bouhat Madad Milti Hay Poet Club Main Yaqeenan Aik Say Aik Umda Likhnay Walay Mowjood Hai'n Jin Ko Read Kar Kay Bouhat Kuch Seekh Bhi Rahi Hoo'n Aur Dil Say Waah Bhi Nikalti Hay Kay Kis Qadar Umda Khayaal Baandha Gaya Hay...Aap Ki Howsla Afzaai Aur Duao'n Ka ...Allah Aap Ko Bouhat Khush Rakhay Aameen...
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hayaa...kia kehnayyy...ghazal bayhad shandaar rahi...bayhad haseen...bohat khubsoorat...lutf aaya parh kar bohat...

1 jagha mujhe kuch garbar lagi..n dats in shair no 2..."ke ashk ankhoN maiN"....yahaN parhnay maiN diqqat ho rahi hai... if possible to isay daikhna phir say ...

mind shind na karna...warna marooNgi

khush raho
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Assalam-0-Alaikum Haya @};-

Janay kia baat hay dil mera laraz jata hay
shaakh se phool kay girnay ka jo manzar dekhooN


buhat khoobsoorat.. buhat hi a'ala.... aap k khayalaat ki zarkheizi k tou hum pehlay hi qayel thay.. ab mazeeed pukhta hogaye heiN apni raye meiN...

Buhat khush rahiye.... aur issi tarhaaN likhti rahiye..
Walekum Assalam

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hayaa...kia kehnayyy...ghazal bayhad shandaar rahi...bayhad haseen...bohat khubsoorat...lutf aaya parh kar bohat...

1 jagha mujhe kuch garbar lagi..n dats in shair no 2..."ke ashk ankhoN maiN"....yahaN parhnay maiN diqqat ho rahi hai... if possible to isay daikhna phir say ...

mind shind na karna...warna marooNgi

khush raho
Walaikum Assalam Mehroo Ji....Chaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaa

Yaqeenan Mujhay Aap Ka Reply Read Kar Kay Bouhat Khushi Hui...Bouhat Acha Laga Mujhay.... Ji Main Is Shair Number 2 Ko To Daikh Loon Gi.
Mehroo Ji Mind Karnay Kay Liye Bhi To Mind Ki Zaroorat Hoti Hay Na...

............. ....Bouhat Khush Rahiye Aameen...

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daagh seene mein numayaan hon k ashk aankhon mein,,
mujhko is se hai gharz ghar ko munawar dekhoon..

log kehte hain sukoon milta hai weerane mein,,
chalo basti se zara door nikal ker dekhoon..

mein hoon haya aur shairi miri kia hai,,
aik se aik zamane mein sukhanwar dekhoon..

sab hi sher itne ache hain kis kis ki tareef keroon
Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui Kay Ghazal Aap Ko Pasand Aai...Itni Ziyada Howsla Afzaai Kay Liye Bouhat Shukriya Qubool Kijiye....
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