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Dil Ki Rag Rag Mai'n Utarta Huwa Nashter Dekhu'n

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Old 09-11-2006, 01:05 PM
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waah haya.... its realy great.... bohat achi ghazal likhi hay aapnay.... bohat khoobbb.........
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daagh seene mein numayaan hon k ashk aankhon mein,,
mujhko is se hai gharz ghar ko munawar dekhoon..

log kehte hain sukoon milta hai weerane mein,,
chalo basti se zara door nikal ker dekhoon..

mein hoon haya aur shairi miri kia hai,,
aik se aik zamane mein sukhanwar dekhoon..

sab hi sher itne ache hain kis kis ki tareef keroon
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Assalam-0-Alaikum Haya @};-

Janay kia baat hay dil mera laraz jata hay
shaakh se phool kay girnay ka jo manzar dekhooN


buhat khoobsoorat.. buhat hi a'ala.... aap k khayalaat ki zarkheizi k tou hum pehlay hi qayel thay.. ab mazeeed pukhta hogaye heiN apni raye meiN...

Buhat khush rahiye.... aur issi tarhaaN likhti rahiye..
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Asslamo alikum lijye haya karachi se lot anay k bad se musataqil aap ko
bohut mohabbat k sath commnts de rahi hoon is gahazl k baray
main sirf itna hi kehna baaki hoga k poet club main jitna achha likhene
walay hain unn main sare fehrest hain aap bhi hain aaj kal aap ka likha
hia mujhe sab se ziyda bha raha hai ALLAh aap k kalam o zehan ko
aur taqat ata farmaaye Ameen(*)
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wah... ye ghazal bhi achi rahi...

maqte meN inkisati ko acha portraykiya kiya hy
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bahot khoob Haya,bahot hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne is baar,har aek sher ne bahot lutf diya,aor mutaasar kiya,(siwaaye #2 sher ke),so dheron daad aap ki is khoobsurat tehreer ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
sher #2...ko ho sake to dobara dekh lijiye ke (aankhon main ashk hone se ghar munawar hona kuchh matlab naheen rakhta mere khayaal main),sher ka doosara misra beharhaal bahot khoobsurat hai,
wese yeh mera bilkul zaati khayaal hai,aor kissi ka bhi is se mutafiq hona zaroori naheen,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti rahi ke bahot achha likhti hain aap,
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Chaaaaaa Gai Haain Bajiaaa Aap..bohat Khoob Bohat Khooob,...lahjawaab. .wah Wah Wah Wah
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