Urdu Poetry Forum

**saahir** · #11 11-23-2006, 09:07 AM

hmmm.wah,,,boht khoobsorat lafzon ka jado jagaya hay aap nay,,waah lutf aagaya,,sohniyon k gharay kachay sahi,,un ka piya amar hota hy,,kiya kahnay hain,,daad qabool kijiay,

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #12 11-23-2006, 09:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Blind_Killer

WalaikumAssalam

Bohat khoob .. wah

Jahan Basta hai Rab sohni
woh dil ka nagar hota

kiya kehnay hai bohat ala bohat umda kalam parhnay ko mila

khush rahiye
oor likhtay rehiye

Aslamualikum

thank u so much itni hosla afzayi k leay

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #13 11-23-2006, 10:00 AM

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Originally Posted by haya n

WalaikumAssalam
Khayaal-e-Nazm Mujhay Bouhat Pasand Aaya...Bouhat Achi Nazm Aap Nay Likhi Hay... Daad Qubool Kijiye.... Isi Tarha Likhna Jaari Rakhiye Owr Share Karti Rahiye...

thank u haya siso ap ki ray ka mughy hamesha intzar rahta hay ayinda b mughy apni qemti aara say nawazti raheay ga ,again thanks

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #14 11-23-2006, 10:01 AM

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Originally Posted by zain

bahot khoob Soniya ji,bahot khoobsurat khayalaat ki akaasi karti huyi aap ki yeh nazam bahot pasand aayi,so bahot si daad is khoobsurat tehreer ki nazar,qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,

thank u so much zain bahi ap sab seniors ki ray mayray leay bohut ahmet rakhti hay , main umed karti hon ayinda b mayre hosla afzayi karyin gay or mayre ghultayon ki nishan dahi bhi

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #15 11-23-2006, 10:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ashk

bohat khub janab..bohat acha khayaal hay

thank u

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**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #16 11-23-2006, 10:03 AM

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Originally Posted by rida jabeen

well done sonia bohut khubsoorat nazam likhi hai aap ne
image bhi acha tha lekin agar img ka size thora chota kardeteb to
4 chaand lag jatay

thank u so much rida siso , asal main mughy image ka size thek karna abhi aata nahi hay inshalha ayinda is bat ka khyal rakhyon gi

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #17 11-23-2006, 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by kanch ki mehroo

bhat achay...dilkash nazam kahi Soniya apne... khayal bohat khoob hai

khush rahiy

thanks mahroo siso ,ayinda b mughy ap ki aara ka intzar rahy ga

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #18 11-23-2006, 10:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sannan

wao,

Sonia buhat khuobsurat nazam ek dilkush image kay sath ..... buhat lutf aaya parh kar .......
keep psoting ....

nazam ko pasnd karnay k leay bohut bohut shukryia

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #19 11-23-2006, 10:06 AM

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Originally Posted by luckylibra

wslaaaaaam
first of all aap ki soch or phir unko alfazoon ki shakal dena bohat bohat acha laga really you have done well job and bohat bohat ziadaa daad qabool keri ore umeed hai kay isi terha hum say poem share kerti rehin gi

bohat bohat ziada duaan kay sath
jahan rahhain boht ziada khush rahin
imran

thank u so much ,itni hosla afzayi k leay

**chariagy-aakhir-shub** · #20 11-23-2006, 10:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by perfectly_created

Achha likha Sonia aap ne ...

Nawaazti rahiye ga! @};-

thanks

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