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This is a discussion on Dil k under kuon bhar gaya hai dhuwan? within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Aik makalmati Ghazal k cund Ashare (Aik adna si koshish)...
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#1
11-01-2006, 11:43 AM
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Aik makalmati Ghazal k cund Ashare (Aik adna si koshish) 
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#2
11-01-2006, 01:03 PM
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bohat khoob.... last sher to kamal hy... mujhy bohat pasand aaya... (lekin ghazal to kam az kam 5 sheroN ki hoti hy.... {5waN sher kahaN hy????}) meri janib se itny achy sher likhny pr dheroN daad qabool kreN....
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11-01-2006, 01:26 PM
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 Aap Ka Likha Jab Bhi Read Kiya Bouhat Umda Laga...Aap Ki Ghazal Bouhat Pasand Aai..Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye... Mai'n Nay To Kuch Poets Ki 4 Ashaar Par Mabni Ghazlai'n Bhi Read Ki Hai'n Is Liye Jaanti Nahi Thi Kay 5 Shair Hona Laazmi Hai'n... 
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11-01-2006, 01:47 PM
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Waaahhhh Pure Female Style,,,,,,,bohut Khoob@};-
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11-01-2006, 03:01 PM
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wahhhh wahh wahhhh...... kyaa khoobsurat andaz-e-baya'n hai aap ka...... bohat khoob........ yoon hi apna likha howa hum say share kerti raha kijiyee .. take care
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11-01-2006, 07:51 PM
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hahhhhh.....na sakhi...woh badal gaye hoNgay... kiya hi shandar shair hai....tamam hi ashaar khoob haiN par yeh shair to jan raha ...Faizan wala sawal hum bhi dohratay haiN...5th shair kahaN hai...balkay jitni khubsoorat yeh ghazal hai..hum to chahaiN gay ke aur bhi bohat saray ashar hoN iske 1.gif ")1") khush rahiye
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11-01-2006, 07:52 PM
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11-01-2006, 09:22 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaah zabar10 se bhi ziyda zabar10  mukalmti ghazalein to meri kamzori hain aap ne kiya hi khoob likhi hai itna maza aya parh k har har misra har sher itna khuboorat laga k bassssssssssss be intha daad kabool kijye
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#9
11-02-2006, 05:22 AM
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Dil k under kuon bhar gaya hai dhuwan? 
