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This is a discussion on dil k behlawey ko ghalib yeh khayal acha hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam o alikum hope so k aap sab ache hon ............. aaj kafiiiiiiiiiiiii dinou baad HG aayi hon or woh ...
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| Assalam o alikum hope so k aap sab ache hon ............. aaj kafiiiiiiiiiiiii dinou baad HG aayi hon or woh bhee shayed is liye k kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaa frankly speaking dil buhat udaas hai dil o demagh ki ban nahi rehi or is se zindagi mutasir ho rahi hai ............... abhi baithey baithey buhat kuch outt patang soujh raha hai or maazarat k saath k aap sab ko apne sir pe haath rakh k is outt patang si ajeeb o gareeb si nazam ghazal kya hai mujhe nahi pata isey hazam kerna pare ga shayed me k dil ko thora sakoon mil jaye isi umeed k saath share ker rahi hoon ............... Mohabbat ik azeeyat hai mohabbat sirf ik derd hai mohabbat jeet hoti hai mager isey haar kehtey hain mohabbat dukh deti hai yeh her ik pal museebat hai mohabbat ik azeeyat hai mohabbat sirf ik derd hai mohabbat mein sabhi jeeney merney ki qasmein khaatey hain mohabbat kerne waley, sapnoun k deep jalaatey hain mohabbat bin maangey mil jaana bhee aik naimat hai mohabbat paa k khoo janey mein bhee koi hikmat hai mohabbat ik azeeyat hai mohabbat sirf ik derd hai mohabbat mein mileey derd bhe apney lagtey hain mohabbat mein miliiii takleef hum rouz sehtey hain mohabbat mein mitta detey hain hum apni hi hasti ko mohabbat mein amer ho janey ki apni si koshish ho mohabbat khuwaab ho ya koi dilchasp haqeeqat ho mohabbat mein hai posheeda takmeel insaan ki mohabbat qaieenaat mein qounjti awaaz hoti hai mohabbat jeet hoti hai mohabbat haar hoti hai yeh her pal terpaati hai mohabbat dil jalaati hai yeh her lamha sataati hai nami aankhoun mein rehti hai khamshi mujh se kehti hai mohabbat tum nahi kerna mohabbat tum nahi kerna hansi apni nahi rehti khushi apni nahi rehti dukh humjouli ban jaatey hain sukh hum se aankh churaatey hain socha thaa hum ne bhee yehi mohabbat hai nahi kerni mager hum haar baithey hain hum khud ko maar baithey hain na apne nafs pe hai qaabu na dil pe hukumraani hai kaho tum hi mujhe humdum yeh kaisi zindagani hai k houn mein khud se sherminda mohabbat meri afsurdah jisey paaya bhee to aise jaise sham'ma ko perwaana usi k ishq mein jeena usi ishq mein hai mer jaana nazroun mein wohi chehra ho yaadoun mein wohi manzer woh her pal sochtey rehna unhi ko chahtey rehna unhi ko maangtey rehna unhi ko kehna mere ho unhi se sherma jaana woh un k saath guzarey pal hon jaisey haseen manzer kaho tum hi mere jaana ho kyoon nazroun se oujhal na din ko chaain aata hai na raat loori sunaati hai teri yaadein teri baatein mujhe ub zakhm deti hain woh beetey pal suhaaney pal hain ub mere liye aik boujh jinhein jaana tum sambhalo mujhe aa ker tum apna lo tumhein paaney se khooney tak tumhein khoo ker apn'aney tak her ik pal thaa imtehaan woh mera dil woh meri jaan tumhi kaho mere humdum mein kaise khud ko samjhaoun k apne dil ko behlaaoun koi to ho ujli kiran jo dey umeed mujhe humdum k ub mein haar baithi hoon mein khud ko maar baithi hoon jo ub hoon mein aise tanha hai dil mera touta sa jo na jurr k bhee jurr paaye na zakhm aise k bher paayein hain bas askhq jo behtey hain yeh baa'rha mujh se kehtey hain sahi kehta thaa pagal dil sahi kehti thee meri soch sahi kehti hai yeh duniya mohabbat ik azeeyat hai mohabbat sirf ik derd hai mein nahi janti kya likha hai kya nahi bas shayed apney dil ka gubaar nikalna chaha janti hoon is mein kuch nahi sirf or sirf aap ki tanqeed k elawa yeh kisi laiq nahi mager bas apne aap ko pursakoon kerne k liye likh di or kafi hadh tak sakoon bhee aa gaya hai .................... . is liye plz aap sab se maazarat
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| tanqeed se hi to insaan seekhta hia or wo insaan ko acha kaam karney per uksaati hia... aap ney jo b likha wo "khud kalaami" k ek andaaz hai shayed...me to shayer nahi hon...isliye ziada gehrai me nahi ja sakta...sirf itna kahon ga ager shayari likhni hai to koshish karen k shaayeri k maayaar k qareeb qareeb ho...kyon k her cheez ka apna muqam hota hia...Bahut Nawazish...Khush Rahen...
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| hmmm... SHAIIRI SUCH BOLTI HAI... ![]() bohttt pyari koshish hai sis jee... ahista ahista flow bhi ata jaega... keep Shaiirii... ![]() and Be happy Udas nahiN honey kaaa na...![]()
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| Masha Allah Bohat Achee Sharing
__________________ Mohabbat Karney Waley Kam Naa Hon Gay |
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No Doubt Aap Mai'n Aik Achi Poetess Chupi Baithi Hay...Aap Isi Tarha Likhti Rahee'n To Aik Din Insha Allah Bouhat Umdagi Say Likhnay Lagai'n Gi...Khayal-e-Nazm Bouhat Hi Khoobsurat Hay Sirf Rawani Ki Kuch Kami Hay Jo Insha Allah Khud Ba Khud Door Hoti Chali Jaey Gi...Bouhat Si Daad Bouhat Si Duao'n Kay Saath Qubool Kijiye...![]()
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#7
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| app ka mohabat nama bohat khub hai................. ........ |
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#8
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| Achai Shairing Hain................ ..........
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#9
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| sunehri ![]() bohat acha laga bohat apna laga ehsas ka naam shairi hai aur aur ehsas kisi qaid ko kab manta hai....so sweto..jo likha bohat acha laga ![]() khush raho..hamesha[aamin]
__________________ MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...! ![]() |
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