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Dil huwa taar taaar apna bhi

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wsalam agar yeh waqai zehmat hai to moin aisi zehmat dene jaldi jaldi
chakar lagaya karein aik lambay arsay k bad aap ko parhaaur sawad agaya daad qubool kijye


Thanks Rida jabeen ji..... ta'areef ka buhat sara shukriya
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wha kia batt hi buhat umdha .................... ..

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again se buhat khoob lamha ji .................... ....................


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Aap Ki Likhi Ghazal Ka Her Shair Bouhat Pasand Aaya...Maqta Khaas Towr Par Bouhat Pasand Aaya...Choti Beher Ki Aik Bouhat Umda Ghazal...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye...


Thanks Haya n ji... .. .buhat khush rahiye
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bewafaon kay zikar main jaanan
naam lay ik bar apna bhi
Ishq sahar nasheen hoa apna
aab janoon sha'aar hay apna bhi
Ik waqfay kay baad kuch parhnay ko milla
aab soch raha hon tareef main kia kahon
woh hi ghisay patay alfaz hain
alfaz ki ki mehnat ka silla nahin day saktay
haan kehnay walay kay khialat or mesoosat
ki tarjumani zaroor kar saktay hain
boht hi ziada pasand aai
ik bar phir mukhtasar behar main itna acha
likhna kamal e fan ka saboot hay
dher sari daad qabool karo
or isi tarah likhtay raho



Thanks primitive bhai urf Budhay

aap ki hosla afzayee k liye mamnoooN hooN meiN

buhat khush rah iye...
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lamha lamha guzar apna bhi ...

wahhhhh .... har shair lajavab ..... kis ki tareef karoon aur kis ki nahi ... ab khud he samajh jana k sab ki tareef ki hay ....

bohat khoob likha hay lamha ...


khush raho ......


Thanks Manahil... buhat khush raho apnay kharchay per




tum bhi khush raho...
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wa-alaikum-as-salam Moin Bhai...

kya khoob nazm kahi hy...

Dil hua taar taar apna bhi,
hy koi gham-gusaar apna bhi...

wah, bohat acha hy mat'ta...
aur maqta bhi bohat umda laga,
lamha ki takraar do mukhtalif maanoN meN achi lagi...

zindgi us pe waar di tu ne,
Lamha lamha guzaar apna bhi...

matla aur maqta k beech k tamaam ashaar bhi bohat khoob rahy, sirf aik lafz ki adaaaigi pr shak ki waja se aik misry ka wazn kuch khrab laga. misra hy "wah ri qismat teri nazar meiN hua". Mery khyal meiN yahaN lafz "waah" ki alif girai nai ja'y gi, balkay wazeh ada ki ja'y gi....


aik khubsurat ghazal kehny pr meri janib se bohat si daad hazir hy,
qubool kreN,

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary...
khush raheN, aabad raheN,
likhty raheN (is se ziada raftaar meiN), aur ham se share krty raheN...


Assalam-0-Alaikum Janab Faizan sahab !

Ghazal ko pasand kernay ka buhat buhat shukriya.... .

jahaaN tak wah ri qismat walay misray ka taluq hay... iss meiN wah ka alif nahiN ri ka ye giraya jaye ga......

Ummeed hay meiN apni baat pohonchanay meiN kamiyab raha hooN
buhat khush rhiye... aur humko perh ker apnay comments deitay rahiye...
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