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This is a discussion on Dil Dard Sey Bojhal Rehta Hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-o-Alaikom thanx mehroo and haya kay apnay meri is new ghazal ki aik mesry kay wazan ma faraq ki nishan ...
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| Assalam-o-Alaikom thanx mehroo and haya kay apnay meri is new ghazal ki aik mesry kay wazan ma faraq ki nishan dahi karadi aor haya nay tu bohut achi suggestion bi ha, aosi suggestion ko liye aos ghazal ko edit karkay dobara post karaha hoon, apka bohut shokriya kay ap sab dost meri poetry itni tawaju sey partay hain. Allah ap sab ko aik pur sakoon aor khush haal zindagi day Ameen. ![]() |
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| very nice sharing
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| kiya hi khoob likha hai janab ,, buhat pasand aaii app ki ghazal ,, yonhi likhtay rahiey ... khush rahiey ![]()
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| bohut acha likha ap nay, or bohut khobsorat alfaz ka istmal keya , ALLAHA kary zoray qalm or zayda |
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![]() wahhhh wahhhhhh...kia bharpooor ghazal kahi aapne...bohat achay janab...boht hi khoob @};- maqta ke misra-e-oola maiN lafz tasweer ne wazan kharab kar dia misray ka...ho sakay to isay dubara daikhiye ga ![]() khush rahiye
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#6
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| bohat achi ghazal hay realy nice keep sharing |
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Aap Ki Jitni Posts Read Ki Hai'n Woh Aik Say Barh Kar Aik Hai'n..Is Ghazal Nay Bhi Dil Ko Choo Liya..Mujhay Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bouhat Pasand Aai...Jis Misray Ki Taraf Mehroo Ji Nay Tawajoh Mabzool Karwai Hay Bas Woh Misra Mumkin Ho To Dekh Lijiye Ga..Mairi Taraf Say Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye...![]()
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| Asslamo alikum janab humesha ki tarha bohut umdah gahazl likhi aap ne daad kabool farmaaye
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