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This is a discussion on Derd within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam o alikum poetry as such nahi aati bas jo dil ne kaha likh dia so bas apney se seniors ...


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Old 04-25-2007, 09:27 PM
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Assalam o alikum

poetry as such nahi aati bas jo dil ne kaha likh dia so bas apney se seniors ki guidence ki zaroorat hai umeed hai zaroor ki jaye gi .............. isi umeed k saath share ker rahi hoon



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bhot achi nazam likhi hai aise he likhti rehye or share karti rehye @};-
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Old 04-25-2007, 09:42 PM
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shukriya ............. inshaALLAh zaroor ager guidence milti rehi to zaroor kerti rahoun gi .................... . mujh se sahi se image share nahi ho rahi is liye ager bata dia jaye ya mod edit ker dein to plz i'll b very thankful .................... .
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very touching
an awesome attempt...keep writing and keep sharing
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Buhat zabardast sunehri ji.... Buhat khushi huwi aap ko yahaaaN dekh ker... aur ye dekh ker k aap ka rishta qalam k sath phir se ustawar hogaya hay ... .
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wha kia batt hi nice nazam sharing.............
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aj pehli bar aap ka likha kuch paRh raha huN,
bohat achy khyaalaat pesh kiay haiN aap ne nazm meN...
acha laga paRh kr,
aur kamran bhai ne image bhi bohat zabardast bnaya hy, bilkul poem se matching....
hope k aap aainda bhi apna kalaam ham se sahre krti raheN gi...

Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary,
khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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greetings
niceeeeeeee
but marna nahi .. hope ke sab theek ho jae ga
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very touching
an awesome attempt...keep writing and keep sharing
shukriya .................... .............. mager yeh sad face to na banayein ................ inshaALLAH
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