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This is a discussion on Deewani within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; MY OWN POETRY...
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| MY OWN POETRY ![]()
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| Waaaaahhhhhh Kia Hii Kahneyn Bohut Hii Khoobsorat Bohut Hii Ummdah@};-
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| achi nazm share ki hy Shabnam sahiba... acha expression hy... lekin pata nahi kyuN, maiN aakhri line ko thek se samajh nahi saka... khair, is line se pehly tak nazm achi rahi, so daad qubool kreN. likhti raheN, aur ham se share krti raheN. Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary... khush raheN, aabad raheN...
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| ik pal ko le dekh palat... jab dil duniya se bhar ja'ay... pori nazm ko dkehty huay is aik aakhri line ki samajh nahi aa'ei (jisy underline kiya hy)... Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 06-06-2007 at 09:16 PM. |
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| sari nazam ko dobara parhain... ![]() mehboob ko duniya main ziada dilchasbi hai so us ko kaha gya hai kay jab duniya say dil bhar jaye tou us ko aik baar palat kay dekho jis ko tumhari talash hai............ |
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| bahot khoob Shabnam saahiba,bahot khoobsurat nazam kahi aap ne,daad qabool kijiye, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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