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This is a discussion on deed ka saamaa.N kerna within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Aaam her giz na kabhi jalwa-e-janaa.N kerna Deed ka parda-e-khilwat mai.N he samaa.N kerna Laag ho dil ke kahi.N deed ...
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#1
11-15-2007, 07:47 AM
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Aaam her giz na kabhi jalwa-e-janaa.N kerna Deed ka parda-e-khilwat mai.N he samaa.N kerna Laag ho dil ke kahi.N deed pareshaa.N ho kahi.N Aisi wehshat na kabhi ham se Ghazalaa.N kerna Ho guzarna jo tera dasht ki tanhai se Zarre zarre ko waha.N ja ke bayaabaa.N kerna shab ki dehleez se le aana sitaroo.N ka ghubaar Noor se us ke he rooshan ye shabistaa.N kerna Us ko her giz na bataana ke junoo.N lahaq he Us ke aage na kabhi chaak garebaa.N kerna shola-e-shaam-o-sahar dil mai.N basa ker us se Raat ki bazm ko aye yaar charaaghaa.N kerna zehr taryaaq he her giz na batana us ko Dard se choor na de dard ka darmaa.N kerna Herf-e-anjaam ko aaghaaz batana us ko ger tajussus ho tu aaghaaz ko unwaa.N kerna Chaand nikle jo kabhi shab ki rida aurhe hue Us ke chehre pe bhi zulfoo.N ko pareshaa.N kerna Jaa mayassr na ager ho tu na kuch bhi kehna Ju mile ja tu use masnad-e-shahaa.N kerna us ko dene ko ager paas tere ho pather Ker ke tadbeer use laal-e-badakhshaa.N kerna kufr-e-hairat he baja phir bhi tra aage kabhi Jab wo aaena bane chashm ko hairaa.N kerna Last edited by khalidrawat; 11-17-2007 at 03:20 PM.         |
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11-16-2007, 05:29 AM
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tazaa ghazal pesh-e-khidmat he |
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#3
11-20-2007, 08:27 PM
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Wah wah wah.....Khalid Bhai....yaqeen manye is ghazal ka koi jawab nahin...main sakht badnaseeb hoon ke itne din ke baad aya aur aap ki ghazal aaj dekhne ko mili hai....behad umda mazameen laye hain aap....intehai achchoote aur nadir khayalaat hain...khaas ker ke ye ash'aar to lajawaab kar gaye. Zehr taryaaq hai hargiz na batana usko Dard se chHoR na de dard ka darmaaN karna (Kia baat hai janab) Shola-e-shaam-o-sahar dil maiN basa kar us se Raat ki bazm ko aye yaar charaghaaN karna (Bhai wahhh....SubhanAllah )
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) |
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11-22-2007, 12:00 PM
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Saraabz sahib ki trha maiN bhi sharminda huN k itni ghazab ki ghazal abhi tak na paRh saka... derguzer kijiay ga... aap ki ghazal bhi esi hy k aik aik shair pr der tak baat krny ko dil chah raha hy... Laag ho dil ke kahi.N, deed pareshaa.N ho kahi.N Aisi wehshat na kabhi ham se Ghazalaa.N kerna wahh... kya baat hy ji... itny achy paira'ay meiN ye baat kahi hy k lutf hi aaa gya, bohat khoob shair hy. zehr taryaaq he her giz na batana us ko Dard se choor na de dard ka darmaa.N kerna wahhhh..... baei kya hi baat hy, bohat khooob... wahhh......... dard se choR na de, dard ka darmaaN krna, baei kya ehsaas hy, aur kya apna'iyat hy is shair meiN... bohat khoob,,,, us ko dene ko ager paas tere ho pather Ker ke tadbeer use laal-e-badakhshaa.N kerna ye shair bhi apni misaal aap hy... "kar k tadbeir..." kya andaz hy jnab, bohat khoob... kabhi kabhi sada bhi baat bhi is khubsurat paira'ay meiN hoti hy k wo bohat lutf deti hy... jnab meri janib se dhairoN daad is khubsurat ghazal ki nazr... sari gahzal hi khoob hy, Allah Mola aap ko bohat ziada ata kary, khush raheN aabad raheN... aur youNhi acha acha likhty aur ham se share krty raheN...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!! |
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#5
11-23-2007, 12:08 PM
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bohut shukriya ashaab ki hosla afzai ka , |
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11-28-2007, 05:37 AM
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thank you for appreciation , |
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11-28-2007, 08:33 AM
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bohat khub................ . |
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