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RulesThis is a discussion on Dard hum chural lete within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; AOA suna hai log meri azaad nazmo'n se tang aa gaye hai'n so is baar qaid ker ke pesh ker ...
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#1
12-05-2005, 03:50 AM
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AOA suna hai log meri azaad nazmo'n se tang aa gaye hai'n so is baar qaid ker ke pesh ker rahi hoo'n  Sukh mein to nibhai thi'dukh mein bhi nibha lete hum wafa ke maro'n ko kiun rahe dagha dete kub thi tum ko majboori hum se jee lagane ki aur ki tamanna thi ' saaf tum bata dete subha damm mehekne ki hum ne ki thi ik khwahish aur aise murjhaye' aas takk ganwa baithe jane kia khushi milti dil se khel ker usko her sukkoo'n woh rakh leta'dard hum chura lete bhole bhale jazbo'n ko jis ne khoo'n rulaya ho aise bewafao'n ko dil se hai'n bhula dete aitbar ki shamma subha-e-abad takk bhi intizar mei'n rehti ' ansoo na ger bujha dete be-khaber hi rehte woh' mere haqq mei'n acha tha yeh hansi unhi se hai' jante... rula dete Jharna
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12-05-2005, 06:58 AM
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bohat achi ghazal hei.very well written.
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12-05-2005, 07:33 AM
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subha damm mehekne ki hum ne ki thi ik khwahish aur aise murjhaye' aas takk ganwa baithe wah khatti mithi....bohat khooob.......  keep writing and sharing....@};-
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12-05-2005, 07:47 AM
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subha damm mehekne ki hum ne ki thi ik khwahish aur aise murjhaye' aas takk ganwa baithe Buhat acha likha ... Ye ID kun chage ki  Buhat khush rahiyay ShAnI @};-
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#5
12-05-2005, 11:22 AM
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Yeh Khurna kiyoon likha hai end per ????
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12-05-2005, 12:13 PM
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subha damm mehekne ki hum ne ki thi ik khwahish aur aise murjhaye' aas takk ganwa baithe bauhat hi khoob ghazal likhi hai bacha  bauhat khush raho 1.gif ")1")
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12-05-2005, 08:48 PM
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Sukh mein to nibhai thi'dukh mein bhi nibha lete hum wafa ke maro'n ko kiun rahe dagha dete Mqta ghazab ka hai .. MashAllah.. kya kehnay.. @};- subha damm mehekne ki hum ne ki thi ik khwahish aur aise murjhaye' aas takk ganwa baithe jane kia khushi milti dil se khel ker usko her sukkoo'n woh rakh leta'dard hum chura lete Poori ghazal hi qabil-e-sitayesh hai... aap ki janib se eik mayari ghazal pa ker bohat khushi huyee...Bohat si daad qabool kijiye.. Aakhri 2 ashaar ko nazr-e-sani ki zaroorat hai .. Bohat Shukria.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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12-05-2005, 09:59 PM
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wah,bahot khoob,bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahi aap ne, "Sukh mein to nibhai thi'dukh mein bhi nibha lete hum wafa ke maro'n ko kiun rahe dagha dete" yeh sher khjaas tor se bahot pasand aaya, bahot khush rahiye.
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12-06-2005, 12:34 AM
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Dard hum chural lete 
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