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RulesThis is a discussion on -=Dard Apna Ab Kisi Ko=- within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; ~`Dard Apna Ab Kisi Ko`~ dard apna ab kisi ko batlaya nahi jata zakhmo ko zakhmo se dabaya nahi jata, ...
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#1
06-03-2007, 01:24 PM
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~`Dard Apna Ab Kisi Ko`~ dard apna ab kisi ko batlaya nahi jata zakhmo ko zakhmo se dabaya nahi jata, koi koi ashq bahut kimti hote hai mol koi unka lagaya nahi jata, hamari chahto ke raste hoker jate they unke dil se yeh sach unko ab batlaya nahi jata, tapish sari seh lete hum apne uper un tak lekin hamara saya nahi jata, jidher dekho andhera hi andhera hai ujale ko jaker ab humse samjhaya nahi jata, wo kar rahey hai ab humse nafa nuksan ki baten''RABI'' zindagi ka falsafa unko samjhaya nahi jata,
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06-03-2007, 02:22 PM
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bahot khoob AG,bahot achhi koshish ki hai aap ne,  kuchh behtari bhi nazar aa rahi hai aap ki shaairy main,jis se zaahir hota hai ke aap kaafi mehnat bhi kar rahi hain,jo ke bahot achhi baat hai,issi tarah mehnat jaari rakhiye,aor likhti rahiye,INSHA ALLAH mazeed behtari aor nikhaar aaye ga kalaam main, 1.gif ")1") bahot khush rahiye,
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06-03-2007, 03:34 PM
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first time ap nay gazal likhi ha achi koshish ha lafzo ka chunayo b acha ha khial b bas thori buhat kami ha jo inshallah improve hoti jaya gi so keep it up best wishes
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06-03-2007, 05:50 PM
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bas ap logo k kehne pe amal ker rahi hun  mehnat to kam hi kerti hun  |
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#5
06-03-2007, 05:54 PM
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u ne read nahi ki hogi may bahaan thank u ab INSHAALLAH wo b improve karun gi (flower4u) thank u shazly (flower4u) |
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#6
06-03-2007, 06:09 PM
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Bhai wah!!! Arabian sis aap nay tu kamal kar diya...kafi behteri nazar aai hay aap ki sukhan pardazi mein.......balkay baaz mawaqay per khayalat ka izhar khubsurti say kiya gaya hay....koshish jaari rakhayn....meray khayal mein jald hi hoslamand nataaij baramad hungay.....ghazalon ko filhaal choti beher mein kehnay ki koshish kijiyay... waisay agar aap maqtay mein takhalus 'Arabian girl' use karayn tu kafi unique rahay ga Khayalaat k itnay umda izhaar per meri taraf say bohot saari daad qubool kijiyay  jeeti rahiyay ,Junki... |
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06-03-2007, 06:27 PM
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 waise idea acha hai lakin kuch funny sa ban jaye ga na (hehe) bohat sara shukriya pasand kerne ka (flower4u) |
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#8
06-03-2007, 10:58 PM
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buhut khoob Arabian Girl jii .. jaisa k junki jii ne kaha k baaz jaga to aap ne khayalat ka izhar buhut khoobsurtii se kiya hai (flower4u) ...... kher ... keep wrting n sharing HASDE WASDE RAWO
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