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This is a discussion on Dairy... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; SALAM APNI LIKHE AK SWEET GHAZAL SHARING KARWARAHA HON URDU LIKHTE WAQT AS MAIN AK GALTHI HO HE HI ... ...
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| SALAM APNI LIKHE AK SWEET GHAZAL SHARING KARWARAHA HON URDU LIKHTE WAQT AS MAIN AK GALTHI HO HE HI ... THIS LINE MARE AANAI KA JUB TUJH KO GUMA HOGA ... US MAI GA LIKHNA BHOOLGAYA UMEED HI PASAND AAI GE ![]()
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#2
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| ASA, u hve done a good job.... but i dont knw mujhe thori si gar bar lag rahi hai..........Mujhe se roothe ga .....se Mere aane ka jab tujh ko guman hoga.........tak i feel kuch kuch mistake hai..sorry but i feel like tht.......may b i mworng and if sooo then again i m sorry............... . |
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| nice ![]()
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#6
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| Am sorry Ali ye image meray pass open nai ho raha ![]() So no comments by my side ye ap ki apni poetry hai tu main esay Urdu POet club main move kar raye hun jahan ap apni lekhi howae Khubsurat poetry Hamaray sath share kar saktay hain Urdu poet club mian mujood Hg poets Or mOds ap ki BAhtreen RahnumAe karain gay ![]()
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#7
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wohan dal choka hon ........hahaha dubara mat dalna asifa ![]() |
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