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This is a discussion on ~*~ CHUP SI LAG JATI HAI ~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Salam kuch roz pehlay moona ka roona nay kanwal sahiba ki aik nazam ka link diya us nazam ke ye ...
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| Salam kuch roz pehlay moona ka roona nay kanwal sahiba ki aik nazam ka link diya us nazam ke ye do lines lay ker aik nazam likhi " MERI JAAN CHUP SI LAG JATI HAI" Nazam to wo nazam perdhtay hi likh dali thi ... deer say share kernay ki wajah ahm ahm secret ![]() Poem from which i took those two line by KANWAL ![]()
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#2
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| ahaa ![]() kakay zaberdast /clap1 the poem as usual superbbb chup see lag jatee hai aha aha wah wah ab tumhe to pata hai mujhay image kitnay achay lagtay hai laikin dekho na jab mai image ki tareef kartee hoo to tumharee bhee to kartee hoo akhir image tumnay hee to lagaya haina ![]() aisey hee pala pala likhtay ruho aur humesha khush ruho /dua /flowers |
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#3
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ThkU shnkU Jee aap dar kun rahi hain /khikhi kerlein imj ke bhe tareef ker lein /y:-p |
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#4
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u com com ![]() dar? kaun sar raha hai ? /oopz ok ok abhee kartee hooo poem to bakwas hai khass baat to image mai hai /toomuch kardee na tareef?? /grinsmile |
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#5
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keh lo keh lo i know /khikhi |
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#6
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keh dia keh diaaaa ;;) acha hua jaldee pata chal gaya warna tum to /mota hojatay tareefain sun sun kar ![]() |
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#7
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| hahahahaha oje tareefon say agar /mota ho sakta to abhi adan sami ka record tord chuka hota ![]() |
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#8
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![]() buhat khub shani ji /wah /rose /wah kush raho dear /yhug
__________________ Ek Aah Bhari Ho Ghi Hum Ne Na Suni Ho Ghi Jate Jate Tum Ne Awaaz Tu Di Ho Ghi ![]() Sukh Da Koi Saa Na Avey...? |
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#9
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| waah/clap5 apki poems waqiyay insan ko speeechless kar deti hain aur aksar auqaaat to phir tareef kay alfaz hi nahi miltay jitni achi aap poems likhtay hain utni tareef karoon to kamm hai..."meri jaaan chip si lag jati hai" topic ka sentence bahdh khoobsurat hai jissay apnay poem pin out ki.....sach some words leave a very hard impression in ur mind aur ussi waqt jab poem ka koi idea click karay to likh dena chahiyay jaisay kay aapnay kaha kay aap kay zehn main achanak ayeee apnay likh dee/clap5Bahut hi khoobsurat nazam with a wonderful topic sentence and not to forget easy vocabulary/y:-p aur saath main the poem has a very good flow of rhymes ![]() ![]() issi tarha aur achi poems likhain aur INSHALLAH ek poori kitaab bana kar hum sab ko copy dena apki poems ki collection bahut interesting hai yun likhtay rahiyay and keep sharing this wonderful art of urs ![]() |