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~*~ CHUP SI LAG JATI HAI ~*~

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Old 07-06-2005, 11:57 AM
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kuch roz pehlay moona ka roona nay kanwal sahiba ki aik nazam ka link diya us nazam ke ye do lines lay ker aik nazam likhi

" MERI JAAN
CHUP SI LAG JATI HAI"

Nazam to wo nazam perdhtay hi likh dali thi ... deer say share kernay ki wajah ahm ahm secret



Poem from which i took those two line by KANWAL

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ahaa

kakay zaberdast /clap1

the poem as usual superbbb chup see lag jatee hai aha aha wah wah

ab tumhe to pata hai mujhay image kitnay achay lagtay hai

laikin dekho na jab mai image ki tareef kartee hoo to tumharee bhee to kartee hoo akhir image tumnay hee to lagaya haina

aisey hee pala pala likhtay ruho aur humesha khush ruho /dua /flowers
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ahaa

kakay zaberdast /clap1

the poem as usual superbbb chup see lag jatee hai aha aha wah wah

ab tumhe to pata hai mujhay image kitnay achay lagtay hai

laikin dekho na jab mai image ki tareef kartee hoo to tumharee bhee to kartee hoo akhir image tumnay hee to lagaya haina

aisey hee pala pala likhtay ruho aur humesha khush ruho /dua /flowers

ThkU shnkU

Jee aap dar kun rahi hain /khikhi

kerlein imj ke bhe tareef ker lein /y:-p
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ThkU shnkU

Jee aap dar kun rahi hain /khikhi

kerlein imj ke bhe tareef ker lein /y:-p

u com com

dar? kaun sar raha hai ? /oopz

ok ok abhee kartee hooo

poem to bakwas hai

khass baat to image mai hai

/toomuch

kardee na tareef?? /grinsmile
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u com com

dar? kaun sar raha hai ? /oopz

ok ok abhee kartee hooo

poem to bakwas hai

khass baat to image mai hai

/toomuch

kardee na tareef?? /grinsmile
u dar gye thienn /khikhi

keh lo keh lo

i know /khikhi
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u dar gye thienn /khikhi

keh lo keh lo

i know /khikhi
mai to hur waqt hee dartee rehti hooo koee new baat bolo /grinsmile

keh dia keh diaaaa ;;)

acha hua jaldee pata chal gaya warna tum to /mota hojatay tareefain sun sun kar
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hahahahaha

oje tareefon say agar /mota ho sakta to abhi adan sami ka record tord chuka hota
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Salam

kuch roz pehlay moona ka roona nay kanwal sahiba ki aik nazam ka link diya us nazam ke ye do lines lay ker aik nazam likhi

" MERI JAAN
CHUP SI LAG JATI HAI"

Nazam to wo nazam perdhtay hi likh dali thi ... deer say share kernay ki wajah ahm ahm secret



Poem from which i took those two line by KANWAL

ahaan
buhat khub shani ji /wah /rose /wah
kush raho dear /yhug
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waah/clap5 apki poems waqiyay insan ko speeechless kar deti hain aur aksar auqaaat to phir tareef kay alfaz hi nahi miltay jitni achi aap poems likhtay hain utni tareef karoon to kamm hai..."meri jaaan chip si lag jati hai" topic ka sentence bahdh khoobsurat hai jissay apnay poem pin out ki.....sach some words leave a very hard impression in ur mind aur ussi waqt jab poem ka koi idea click karay to likh dena chahiyay jaisay kay aapnay kaha kay aap kay zehn main achanak ayeee apnay likh dee/clap5

Bahut hi khoobsurat nazam with a wonderful topic sentence and not to forget easy vocabulary/y:-p aur saath main the poem has a very good flow of rhymes issi tarha aur achi poems likhain aur INSHALLAH ek poori kitaab bana kar hum sab ko copy dena apki poems ki collection bahut interesting hai yun likhtay rahiyay and keep sharing this wonderful art of urs
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