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This is a discussion on Chand gali to utra hoga within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Chand gali to utra hoga Mujhse shayud rootha hoga Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga ...
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| Chand gali to utra hoga Mujhse shayud rootha hoga Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga Chupke chupke poNcha hoga AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga Usne khat to bheja hoga Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga
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#2
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![]() Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga Chupke chupke poNcha hoga AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga Usne khat to bheja hoga Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga wahhhh bhai ji... bohat khoooob @};- khush rhiye
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#3
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| Usne khat to bheja hoga Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga aa haa kya baat hai bohat haseen ghazal hai... mukhtasir beher ki ghazal likhna mushkil kaam hai per aap nay bohat khoobsurati sey ghazal k taqaze ko pora keya hai bohay khoob
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#4
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![]() aaj pehli dafa hai ke aap ka kaalm parh raha hoo'n , achha laga ![]() bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hai . achhi umeed-o-beem ki kaifiyyat bayaan ki hai aap ne Usne khat to bheja hoga Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga bohat khoob ![]() waslam ankaboot. |
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#5
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| Thanx to all of you for the appreciation in such beautiful words.It is its own reward for a poem. Brijinder"Sagar" |
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#8
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khush rahein..
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#9
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| Thanx a lot,Aaina,for the appreciation of my poem in these warm words. Brijinder"Sagar" |