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Bus Tum Apna Khayal Rakhna

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Old 11-08-2007, 02:49 PM
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thank u all my friends. i m much obliged and really thankful for all the likings and encouragment i got on my first sharing( tujh ko udaas dekhoon) To tell u truth. what i've written till now i'll share with u. I dont know how i write poetry (good or bad), u r the best judge for me but whats happening in my life for a couple of years and my poetry is based on it. All i have written is with Guriya and with her permission i m sharing my poetry which is all written on her.



Main Kaun Hoon Tumhara !!,
Kya Rishta Hai Mera Tum Se !!,
To Phir Kyun Ho Koi Bhi Shikwa,
Koi Bhi Gila Tum Se.

Tumhein Haqq Hai Guriya,
Naye Raaston Se Guzro,
Nayi Manzilon Ko Dhondo,
Apni Aankhein Khumar Kar Lo,
Kahin Mastiyon Mein Dobo,

Bus Ye Ehtmaam Rakhna
Khud Ko Sanbhaal Rakhna,
Meri Neendon Ki Fiqr Chhoro,
Bus Tum Apna Khayal Rakhna
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goooooooood 1.......
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Welcome to HG..

bohat hi umdaaa sharing dear,,,,,,,,,,, keep sharing
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wah........boht umda sharing...

keep it upppppppppppppppp
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very nice...

thanx for sharing,

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zabardust,zabardust,zabardust
buhat buhat achi sharing hai.
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Simply gre8.............:an gel1
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very nice................ .....
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